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Killer Haikus 7.0
(i) The Sorry Bug
I had to kill you
You left me no choice at all
Squished under my foot
(ii) One or the Other
Killing is easy
But dying never ever is
Rather kill than die
(iii) Double Suicide Not!
I've got two bullets
It should really be one each
You're getting both
(iv) Tough Guy
I let the blood flow
Throat slit with open razor
You're not so tough now
(v) Objector
Get ready, aim, fire
Man shot dead for cowardice
Shot dead by cowards
(vi) Can You Count
Children dying needless
One dies every minute
Ten died for this poem
(vii) Nothing After
Death is the ending
Of your futile existence
Only the black page
Published 16th Nov 2017
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17th Nov 2017 1:48pm
The poor bug! I love bugs! (lol)
Seven bombs or seven bullets, I can't decide.
Brilliantly executed poetry ;)
Seven bombs or seven bullets, I can't decide.
Brilliantly executed poetry ;)
17th Nov 2017 1:52pm
wow - at last! A comment (lol) :-)))))))))))))
thank you my friend :-))))))))
Big Huge Hugs :-)))))))))))))))
thank you my friend :-))))))))
Big Huge Hugs :-)))))))))))))))
17th Nov 2017 1:57pm
Yup these haikus were looking a little lonely without comment, didn't want any assassins creepin up on them (LOL)
HUGS :))))
HUGS :))))
Anonymous
17th Nov 2017 2:26pm
Okay, the bug cracked me up! You always take us on such unexpected journeys with these. Intense pieces these. Doesn't stop the hugs from coming your way! :)
18th Nov 2017 2:35am
Shivers...my friend! Nothing like Haiku from the POV of a psychotic killer....or your "deranged" other half...( gol )
These definitely create all those emotional responses that lead to goosebumps, and the feeling of stomach-somersaults...while causing some well-known words and phrases to be uttered as well! ;) But....those who know you, realize that, this is just what happens when you allow those naughty little demons of yours to run about unsupervised! (hee! hee!) ( However,this does tend to produce some of your more disturbing, though best pieces from your darker side!)
Quick Hugs....just in case your alternate ego is still in charge! :P
These definitely create all those emotional responses that lead to goosebumps, and the feeling of stomach-somersaults...while causing some well-known words and phrases to be uttered as well! ;) But....those who know you, realize that, this is just what happens when you allow those naughty little demons of yours to run about unsupervised! (hee! hee!) ( However,this does tend to produce some of your more disturbing, though best pieces from your darker side!)
Quick Hugs....just in case your alternate ego is still in charge! :P
18th Nov 2017 2:36am
LOL - Hugs are always welcome, just not too quick :-)))
Huge big Hugsssss :-)
Huge big Hugsssss :-)
