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My body, Your Canvas
We blend like every shade of sunrise
Our bodies woven like canvas
I pull her hair like a hand full of bristles across my palette
absorbing paint and soaking panties
Stroke
I frame her with my thighs
A beveled edge anchored to her tongue
An autograph, a scratch on her back, a hicky on her shoulder....
~Nourish
Published 15th Nov 2017
| Edited 1st Dec 2017
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15th Nov 2017 9:37pm
This a wonderful picture that you've painted with your words. It has the perfect balance of hues to make it tantalizingly tasteful. Thank you for sharing it.
16th Nov 2017 4:38am
"Like a handful of bristles across my palette" I like the image this brings.
1st Dec 2017 3:41am
Short and sweet. Less is definitely more, in this case. But just a heads-up: typo: 6th line, 1st word
1st Dec 2017 3:55am
4th Dec 2017 5:11pm
Love this! You're my favorite poet I've found on here. You'e so unique with your words
5th Dec 2017 2:01am
Wow that makes me so happy! I hope I can continue that same sentiment with future poems. Thank you 😊
5th Dec 2017 2:26am
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14th Dec 2017 4:16pm
Your words created a rhapsody in my mind...
The embers of desire refuse to die down
The embers of desire refuse to die down
Anonymous
29th Jan 2018 8:05pm
OK this one was short but very sweet very sexxxy
My fave erotic poem from you so far
My fave erotic poem from you so far
2nd Feb 2018 5:25pm
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