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I Am SourMelon0313
A poetess, I dare call myself-
yet lack experience
But that's okay-
I am here to learn
From the privacy of my room,
a purpose to express,
I bravely bring my heart here
Stepping up my game..
I learned..
There's more than just expressions of emotions,
that there is to poetry...
Improper grammars and unstructured formats..
I'd fault me English-second-language...!
But,
I know it's no excuse..
I am SourMelon0313-
I love Melons,
but not the sour ones
SourMelon0313,
my pen name here-
but,
my real name has a deeper meaning from my origin
(The Sky!)
A craze for zodiacs,
fervent of conspiracy theories(did you know there's reptilian aliens??)
0313, A Pisces sign-
through the blues of water I swim...
deep,
in the wave of my emotions
Although my foreign features
I do,
live in America...
( a big country it is too...)
A young writer am I?
Still, I shall strive
I, SourMelon0313
Don't be tricked by innocent looks,
for a devil lies within..!
I am, SourMelon0313!
yet lack experience
But that's okay-
I am here to learn
From the privacy of my room,
a purpose to express,
I bravely bring my heart here
Stepping up my game..
I learned..
There's more than just expressions of emotions,
that there is to poetry...
Improper grammars and unstructured formats..
I'd fault me English-second-language...!
But,
I know it's no excuse..
I am SourMelon0313-
I love Melons,
but not the sour ones
SourMelon0313,
my pen name here-
but,
my real name has a deeper meaning from my origin
(The Sky!)
A craze for zodiacs,
fervent of conspiracy theories(did you know there's reptilian aliens??)
0313, A Pisces sign-
through the blues of water I swim...
deep,
in the wave of my emotions
Although my foreign features
I do,
live in America...
( a big country it is too...)
A young writer am I?
Still, I shall strive
I, SourMelon0313
Don't be tricked by innocent looks,
for a devil lies within..!
I am, SourMelon0313!
Published 15th Nov 2017
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15th Nov 2017 5:03am
yes you are...what a great way to declare and say hello to the world bravo
-Jeff
-Jeff
15th Nov 2017 5:12am
Yes I am, Jeff..!
Haha, thank you so much for your warm welcome in my lil' work...
Your support and comments even leaves the mouth-less heart of mine to a fuzzy smile..! :)
Greatly appreciated,
-H-
Haha, thank you so much for your warm welcome in my lil' work...
Your support and comments even leaves the mouth-less heart of mine to a fuzzy smile..! :)
Greatly appreciated,
-H-
15th Nov 2017 5:16am
15th Nov 2017 5:19am
But what if it starts eating itself up and soon,
I shall be left with no heart to feel and beat, wouldn't I?
Shan't we leave it with no mouth,
and smile at rare events like this?
I shall be left with no heart to feel and beat, wouldn't I?
Shan't we leave it with no mouth,
and smile at rare events like this?
15th Nov 2017 6:07am
15th Nov 2017 10:34am
Nice write my Little one. Since you're sharing ... my name means "solitude" and I am a Scorpio ... watch out!
15th Nov 2017 3:58pm
Thank you so much for your kind comments and sharing..!
Your visits lighten my days...!
With much gratitude,
-H-
Your visits lighten my days...!
With much gratitude,
-H-
15th Nov 2017 7:53pm
tian...sky or heaven?
this is pretty incredible. i love the nontraditional format too...i feel you used it well ti create multiple layers.
this is pretty incredible. i love the nontraditional format too...i feel you used it well ti create multiple layers.
15th Nov 2017 8:08pm
Oh,
you flatter me with such great compliment!
Lol I wasn't sure what you meant by tian but I figured out it's a Chinese dish..!
No...I'm not Chinese (although I do get mistaken as a Chinese in real life)..!
I am Korean,
I guess this shall be my first revealing my real name, but it is
Hanuel (or Haneul)
it's sky in Korean...
Thank you, for your time in my works , Prometheus :)
-H-
you flatter me with such great compliment!
Lol I wasn't sure what you meant by tian but I figured out it's a Chinese dish..!
No...I'm not Chinese (although I do get mistaken as a Chinese in real life)..!
I am Korean,
I guess this shall be my first revealing my real name, but it is
Hanuel (or Haneul)
it's sky in Korean...
Thank you, for your time in my works , Prometheus :)
-H-
16th Nov 2017 5:02pm
sure. thank you for sharing and not being mad at my mistake about your culture. i studied ancient chinese and was taking a chance on being right.
