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Autumn Chaos
Colors fade to brown
Crushed leaves, bones beneath my feet
Bare trees become tombs
Crushed leaves, bones beneath my feet
Bare trees become tombs
Published 14th Nov 2017
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2017 3:06pm
But those sleeping tombs will one day begin to bloom. Autumn is my favorite 😊
15th Nov 2017 8:15am
14th Nov 2017 4:04pm
Epic.so many thoughts come rushing from reading this.homes becoming tombs,gods can crush us all at anytime like roach bugs crawling...too cool. great write jemac.
15th Nov 2017 8:16am
15th Nov 2017 2:19am
wow! this is so beautiful - I have a photo of the forest, can I print this haku on it - I would include your name :-))))))
Huge Like :-)))))))))))))
Huge Like :-)))))))))))))
15th Nov 2017 4:06am
Thank you so much David ... It would be an honor for you to place my haiku with your photograph ... I would love to see it too 😊
15th Nov 2017 4:10am
will do I might even put it on the paper I made in the forest :-))))
will send you a photo of it and it will go up on my wall in a frame :-))))
Thank you
will send you a photo of it and it will go up on my wall in a frame :-))))
Thank you
15th Nov 2017 8:18am
Anonymous
21st Nov 2017 6:07pm
Ah JeM, your imagery is insanely impeccable and lovely!!
27th Nov 2017 11:15pm
Thank you so much Splitsunsets for the read and lovely comments .. Greatly appreciated .
27th Nov 2017 2:40pm
27th Nov 2017 11:16pm
