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But from a different Angle...
*Slide, Sneaker, n' Shiver can be ok...prompted by A.T.'s poem challenge*
SHIVER me timbers!
Tis a boot, not a SNEAKER
pay attention kid, listen
to Da speaker...
SLIDE in my ride
let's head westside
where Da ballers ball
n' risk their pride...
Alas, the seeker has come
though, all in disguise (the lil
SNEAKER) wised up when
he couldn't peep her, lily-
livered he'd SHIVER
for verse he wished to
gift her...like a SLIDE show
to sideshow, yo you Betta
ask somebody if ya don't know...
Dismissed, he missed a giver
Left in the cold, her diss
like a forearm SHIVER
followed by a boot to
the abdominal section,
but to just let that ish
SLIDE? had him hot enough
to catch a fever, that
is until she leant O'vr
n' signed his SNEAKER...!
lol
SHIVER me timbers!
Tis a boot, not a SNEAKER
pay attention kid, listen
to Da speaker...
SLIDE in my ride
let's head westside
where Da ballers ball
n' risk their pride...
Alas, the seeker has come
though, all in disguise (the lil
SNEAKER) wised up when
he couldn't peep her, lily-
livered he'd SHIVER
for verse he wished to
gift her...like a SLIDE show
to sideshow, yo you Betta
ask somebody if ya don't know...
Dismissed, he missed a giver
Left in the cold, her diss
like a forearm SHIVER
followed by a boot to
the abdominal section,
but to just let that ish
SLIDE? had him hot enough
to catch a fever, that
is until she leant O'vr
n' signed his SNEAKER...!
lol
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Re. But from a different Angle...
10th Nov 2017 2:47am
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10th Nov 2017 3:07am
Wow, thanks bro. That's very kind to say n I'm deeply grateful for it n ur support :)
Re. But from a different Angle...
10th Nov 2017 3:14am
Written like a true poet, take a lame write and make something of it.
You help make this site proud, Poe.
You help make this site proud, Poe.
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Re: Re. But from a different Angle...
10th Nov 2017 3:40am
AAaawwww ur sooooo sweet... I'm flattered, n thank u sweetie... Just was trying to help u see ur thoughts
actually were pretty good :)
actually were pretty good :)
Re. But from a different Angle...
10th Nov 2017 9:46am
Re: Re. But from a different Angle...
10th Nov 2017 10:23am
Ah yea, humor n me are good friends lol...thank you sweetness, I appreciate you...
Re. But from a different Angle...
10th Nov 2017 10:50am
Re: Re. But from a different Angle...
10th Nov 2017 11:34am
Re. But from a different Angle...
10th Nov 2017 2:03pm
And heeeee's back with his imaginative stories! Well done, per usual, PoetikOne!
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Re: Re. But from a different Angle...
10th Nov 2017 3:26pm
Aaawww... well I'm flustered with blushing :)
Thank u my dearest lady, truly grateful... :)
Thank u my dearest lady, truly grateful... :)
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10th Nov 2017 9:51pm
Re. But from a different Angle...
Anonymous
11th Nov 2017 00:59am
This shows your amazing versatility. Brava dear poet.
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11th Nov 2017 1:23am
Re. But from a different Angle...
11th Nov 2017 12:16pm
This reads very nicely with rhyming, and the wording is
super, but honestlyI had a hard time understanding western humor lol....
Love, RoseJasmine
super, but honestlyI had a hard time understanding western humor lol....
Love, RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. But from a different Angle...
11th Nov 2017 12:25pm
It wasn't meant to have any deep meaning
just bein silly lol but hey if u laughed that's all
I wanted...thank you my dear... :)
just bein silly lol but hey if u laughed that's all
I wanted...thank you my dear... :)
Re. But from a different Angle...
I did laugh my dear. Something funny...
Every time when someone says, "hey Jasmine let me tell you a joke, I will laugh..." I think the most funny scene is me myself.....
Every time when someone says, "hey Jasmine let me tell you a joke, I will laugh..." I think the most funny scene is me myself.....
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