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Collaboration Session 1
[Part 1]
{Start of an Epic}
(collab of Bliss and Prophet)
“So topic?”
‘Topic? We don't do topics! We just write!
Maybe a topic,
I Don’t Know
ummm.....
Just lots of vivid images along with whatever meaning
Rich vivid words & descriptions
Hard for me, I'm usually more ethereal
I'm thinking of altering my perception
Should we go all Dream trippy, like we tend to?
Like …
Oh, you're on....scratch my lines’
“this is gettin tripped the fuck out”
‘I gotta write more
We can write two poems,
& cut & paste from what we've got
…
or something’
“thats ill”
‘I have more about to float your way’
“… had to catch up quick with emails”
‘I fuckin love it
Gonna stop rhyming for a bit
I think we have at least two poems here if we wanna
I wanna have something to post in the morning, anyway’
“hell ya.
…
that last bit felt like I summoned
a lil bit of the dragonyear”
‘I love it
It's a mixture
bit of dy bit of violet, bit o shaman
deep
love it
tryin somethin
got distracted’
“space jam the poem
…
I think thats good.
wanna throw on an ending.
I went off on the beginning”
‘I wanna chop up the whole thing
and piece it together like a puzzle
I didn't imagine this as one piece
I was just flowing, going,
with what I'm Knowing’
“ooooh wanna each of us
chop it up separate see if that works”
‘shit man
too much competition
I'm too good for you’
“You’re right”
‘I'll let you do it first
then send it to me
I usually trust your eye
And always have a few minor changes
…
I know this isn't a cohesive story...just snippets of thought
Yeah...I gotta go to the poems when we're done & fix it all
Shit
Forget it
We still writing?
Yo? dude?’
“don’t know, i guess you should start editing, maybe”
‘Me? LOL...is this all one poem?
Should I add some of our talking lines?’
“mos def”
‘I'll need a few min for this
It may be 2 poems in the end
1 poem a split series of stories
The other poem about writing a poem’
{Start of an Epic}
(collab of Bliss and Prophet)
“So topic?”
‘Topic? We don't do topics! We just write!
Maybe a topic,
I Don’t Know
ummm.....
Just lots of vivid images along with whatever meaning
Rich vivid words & descriptions
Hard for me, I'm usually more ethereal
I'm thinking of altering my perception
Should we go all Dream trippy, like we tend to?
Like …
Oh, you're on....scratch my lines’
“this is gettin tripped the fuck out”
‘I gotta write more
We can write two poems,
& cut & paste from what we've got
…
or something’
“thats ill”
‘I have more about to float your way’
“… had to catch up quick with emails”
‘I fuckin love it
Gonna stop rhyming for a bit
I think we have at least two poems here if we wanna
I wanna have something to post in the morning, anyway’
“hell ya.
…
that last bit felt like I summoned
a lil bit of the dragonyear”
‘I love it
It's a mixture
bit of dy bit of violet, bit o shaman
deep
love it
tryin somethin
got distracted’
“space jam the poem
…
I think thats good.
wanna throw on an ending.
I went off on the beginning”
‘I wanna chop up the whole thing
and piece it together like a puzzle
I didn't imagine this as one piece
I was just flowing, going,
with what I'm Knowing’
“ooooh wanna each of us
chop it up separate see if that works”
‘shit man
too much competition
I'm too good for you’
“You’re right”
‘I'll let you do it first
then send it to me
I usually trust your eye
And always have a few minor changes
…
I know this isn't a cohesive story...just snippets of thought
Yeah...I gotta go to the poems when we're done & fix it all
Shit
Forget it
We still writing?
Yo? dude?’
“don’t know, i guess you should start editing, maybe”
‘Me? LOL...is this all one poem?
Should I add some of our talking lines?’
“mos def”
‘I'll need a few min for this
It may be 2 poems in the end
1 poem a split series of stories
The other poem about writing a poem’
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