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Resurrected
It is only when the clouds roll in
When the storm begins
And the rain pours down
That your unadulterated beauty unfolds
Like Lazarus, resurrected
You are truly alive
When the storm begins
And the rain pours down
That your unadulterated beauty unfolds
Like Lazarus, resurrected
You are truly alive
Published 8th Nov 2017
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- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
8th Nov 2017 9:16pm
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10th Nov 2017 5:29am
9th Nov 2017 3:38pm
I really liked your poem
a common theme...
"resurrected"
by beautiful, different...
the arranging of your words
I saw this....hope you don't mind
"only when
clouds roll in,
storms begin.
pouring rain.
unadulterated
like Lazarus, resurrected.
Your beauty,
truly,
unfolding.
You become alive"
a common theme...
"resurrected"
by beautiful, different...
the arranging of your words
I saw this....hope you don't mind
"only when
clouds roll in,
storms begin.
pouring rain.
unadulterated
like Lazarus, resurrected.
Your beauty,
truly,
unfolding.
You become alive"
10th Nov 2017 5:31am
Mystic, I like your input. Definitely adds a different flavor to the poem when written that way. Thanks for stopping by!
