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Inside and Out
What a fool believes,
his minds eye imagines
the rapture felt between
can words even define what she sees....
…..what a fool believes
no matter how wet
the passion drips
between our union,
it's juices
flow down it's lusty path
smooth like blacque velvet
hot
burnin'
our flesh
no matter how hard she rides
my body...
...her pussy
grips my throb
so damned tight
her frothy cream
squirts in
between the sounds
of hips thrusting, crashing
inside out
up and down
whipped and white
maneuvering my
piston,
displacing the space
within her
sugary walls
her body, once soft
now muscular
and tight
darkened nipples swollen,
her precious pearl erect....
(...this man's most hedonistic delight)
bodies pressed firmly together
attempting to find release
I can feel my cock
breech her “sweetest taboo”
so deliciously
swollen inside her
I feel it “skin to skin” ,
concupiscent, orgasmic
feeling our emotions starting to bloom,
witness our brazen sin
our bodies kneaded together,
dough rising.....making and breaking each other
like bread
the billows rage as we flow across
tidal waves
holding on to the rapture
as we
make savage love
all over this bed (.....slowly cummin' into view)
sympathetic moans
as her voice beckons.....
…..”fuck me”
what a fool believes
his minds eye imagines
the rapture
what she must feel
beyond surreal
can words even capture....
…..what a fool believes
Published 6th Nov 2017
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The musical flourishes are as delightful as ever. I am struck by the metaphorical hue of the title, as your perspective encompasses both the observer of her charms and the fortunate being subjected to direct interaction.
7th Nov 2017 4:58pm
....this will probably get edited somewhat as I am writing quite briskly in between projects. I'm sure I will return to this several times making changes. (does anyone else do that?) Please feel free to comment and offer suggestions if you will. (My skin is fairly thick though pliable so what you say will not offend, I promise) 😉
6th Nov 2017 9:06pm
7th Nov 2017 5:01pm
Thank you sir. That was the intended effect.....with just enough of a "neural" edge to give it a little "warmth" (if you get what I'm saying 😉
6th Nov 2017 9:11pm
7th Nov 2017 5:04pm
Thank you my dear......
......but this ride is designed to keep you at the edge of your seat; no seat belts required. Do you find yourself able to identify with any of the emotions, the feelings portrayed? How does it feel? 😘
......but this ride is designed to keep you at the edge of your seat; no seat belts required. Do you find yourself able to identify with any of the emotions, the feelings portrayed? How does it feel? 😘
6th Nov 2017 9:16pm
Favourite verse:
bodies pressed firmly together
attempting to find release
I can feel my cock
breech her “sweetest taboo”
so deliciously
swollen inside her
inside out, I feel it “skin to skin”
concupiscent, orgasmic
feeling our emotions starting to bloom
The pic, with the one of the bodies looking like melting chocolate, underlines the heat conveyed in verse.
bodies pressed firmly together
attempting to find release
I can feel my cock
breech her “sweetest taboo”
so deliciously
swollen inside her
inside out, I feel it “skin to skin”
concupiscent, orgasmic
feeling our emotions starting to bloom
The pic, with the one of the bodies looking like melting chocolate, underlines the heat conveyed in verse.
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