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Marital First Aid
When the beast is asleep
On tip toes you creep
For fear of his anger and ire
There seems no solution
Your minds’ in confusion
Revenge is what you desire
Despite being willing
There no point in killing
For both of you lose your own life
Put the beast on ignore
As you slam that door
No longer being his wife
The beast now awake
His emotions all fake
He needs the love of a mother
To wash, cook and clean
To do things obscene
Sadly he’ll just find another
For marital abuse
There is no excuse
Stay and flog a dead horse
It’s just deprivation
There’s no justification
The penalty is to divorce
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Re. Marital First Aid
6th Nov 2017 2:41am
dearest David fucking eh right
no excuse for such a man
who would harm a gentle woman..
damn good write..
love & hugs
Brenda
no excuse for such a man
who would harm a gentle woman..
damn good write..
love & hugs
Brenda
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Re: Re. Marital First Aid
7th Nov 2017 00:38am
thank you sweet Brenda - it's a bug bear of mine :-(
Huge Big Hugs :-)))))))))
Huge Big Hugs :-)))))))))
Re. Marital First Aid
6th Nov 2017 3:02am
An absolute, end of the game, "Hit the road Jack, and don't cha come back no more."
MY MAN!!
MY MAN!!
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Re: Re. Marital First Aid
7th Nov 2017 00:59am
Re. Marital First Aid
6th Nov 2017 3:04am
dearest poet
I was in an abusive relationship
thankfully I got out by reporting his abuse
truer words were never written
to the curb with a one such as this..
excellent & all too real write..
~Raven
I was in an abusive relationship
thankfully I got out by reporting his abuse
truer words were never written
to the curb with a one such as this..
excellent & all too real write..
~Raven
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Re: Re. Marital First Aid
7th Nov 2017 1:00am
thank you Raven - I have a bug up my ass about any kind of abuse :-)
Hugs :-)
Hugs :-)
Re. Marital First Aid
Never any excuse for abuse! Time to find the nearest curb, and drop-kick that loser right square in the middle of it!
sadly, far too many marriages/relationships are filled with more pain--physical...emotional/psychological--than mutual caring,respect, and love. And, when the union becomes this toxic, it's definitely time walk away....walk away fast....never looking back....
David....this one definitely tells it like it is--(or at least how it should be...dealt with)--in a way that has me saying " O....hell Yesss!!! (Even though this guy deserved much more than the penalty of divorce....just sayin'! lol ! )
Sl`ainte,...to You, mo chara! Hugs!
sadly, far too many marriages/relationships are filled with more pain--physical...emotional/psychological--than mutual caring,respect, and love. And, when the union becomes this toxic, it's definitely time walk away....walk away fast....never looking back....
David....this one definitely tells it like it is--(or at least how it should be...dealt with)--in a way that has me saying " O....hell Yesss!!! (Even though this guy deserved much more than the penalty of divorce....just sayin'! lol ! )
Sl`ainte,...to You, mo chara! Hugs!
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I have zero tolerance for any kind of abuse or bullies :-)
Massive hugs my friend :-)
Massive hugs my friend :-)
Re. Marital First Aid
6th Nov 2017 4:12am
Thank you for defending truth and the value of women in this piece David :) ^ Others already said it, but there's never any excuse for anyone to abuse anyone.
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Re: Re. Marital First Aid
7th Nov 2017 1:05am
thank you AtoMik one - the secret to a worthwhile society is unfettered equality :-)
Re. Marital First Aid
6th Nov 2017 12:05pm
Thank you for speaking about this in such an honest way. Abuse goes both ways though.
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Re: Re. Marital First Aid
7th Nov 2017 1:06am
Yeah it can do, but men are bastards and I can say that by knowing how men are :-))))))))))
thank you :-))
thank you :-))
Re. Marital First Aid
Anonymous
6th Nov 2017 2:33pm
I put up with lots of emotional abuse from my ex but I drew the line at physical. He hit me once and I was out that door so fast it was still slamming when I boarded the plane. No excuse ever...for physical emotional or verbal. Absolutely right, David! Many fierce hugs
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Re: Re. Marital First Aid
7th Nov 2017 1:08am
I am sorry to hear that - you did the right thing - men don't really change their nature :-(
Huge warm hugs :-)))))))
Huge warm hugs :-)))))))
Re. Marital First Aid
Anonymous
6th Nov 2017 6:47pm
David, my friend...there are many times as well, where they abused blames self, even if never abused physical, the mental and emotional abuse will continue until true self worth is discovered...a long road sometimes traveled...
Thousands upon thousands of warm fuzzies shared with you this afternoon!
xoxo Taryn
Thousands upon thousands of warm fuzzies shared with you this afternoon!
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Marital First Aid
7th Nov 2017 1:10am
oh indeed - it is a sad fact that most people who are abused tend to blame themselves - the opposite is always the case :-)
finding self worth is the key :-)
Huge Big Hugs :-)
finding self worth is the key :-)
Huge Big Hugs :-)
Re. Marital First Aid
12th Nov 2017 5:16pm
Haunting conveyance... a timely post.
Thank you for speaking out against marital abuse!
Warrior Hugss :)
Thank you for speaking out against marital abuse!
Warrior Hugss :)
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Re: Re. Marital First Aid
20th Feb 2018 4:12am
I will remember the 5th of November, not for firework night, or Guy Fawkes - I will remember it for witnessing a very brave lady take a stand and refuse to be a marital victim.
fly nightbirdblue :-) <3
fly nightbirdblue :-) <3