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Ultimate Defeat
She's just so perfect she's just so sweet
Minds running so fast you'd think it has feet
When she looks at me it makes my heart skip a beat. But knowing I can't have her is the ultimate defeat.
Minds running so fast you'd think it has feet
When she looks at me it makes my heart skip a beat. But knowing I can't have her is the ultimate defeat.
Published 6th Nov 2017
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6th Nov 2017 3:55pm
Lol I think we have had all had that unobtainable girl who runs around our heads teasing us with her dance. I personally would like to see you build on this idea. Remember poetry is more about using images to show the reader something then it is about rhyming.
