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Forest Inspired Haikus 7.0
(i) Messages
Celtic text message
Paper made without machine
Its vegan friendly
(ii) Black
Charcoal messages
Black letters and dark thinking
Ashes to ashes
(iii) Love of the Fifties
Square bird boxes seen
Just for squares daddy-oh
Not for groovy chicks
(iv) Stripping is Hot
Striping the willow
Cut to size placed in a tin
Burning to charcoal
(v) Stuffing
Go! Taxidermy!
The dead are reborn again
They go and get stuffed
(vi) Good Tunes
I applaud the woods
The wind whistles through the trees
Magical flutes
(vii) Born Again Hippie
Just try branching out
Converted to nature's beauty
Respecting all life
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Re: Re. Forest Inspired Haikus 7.0
4th Nov 2017 1:35am
thank you much they were also inspire by me making my own paper and my own charcoal - I think I am becoming a Hippie :-)
thank you - glad you had fun :-)
thank you - glad you had fun :-)
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Re. Forest Inspired Haikus 7.0
Anonymous
4th Nov 2017 1:52am
This is great David
I think you are going to turn into a David Haikus.
You're a master at them
I think you are going to turn into a David Haikus.
You're a master at them
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5th Nov 2017 11:45pm
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2017 4:23am
The image of magic flutes whistling in the trees...love that! But I'm a moss loving hippy so that's right up my alley. Happy hippy hugs ☺🤗
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5th Nov 2017 11:46pm
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2017 5:51am
Stellar writes/write my friend.
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5th Nov 2017 11:46pm
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4th Nov 2017 11:01am
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Re. Forest Inspired Haikus 7.0
4th Nov 2017 7:47pm
David..it is so clearly evident that the Woodland Muses, or perhaps even the Forest Faeries, may have been whispering in your ears with these Haiku!
Each and every one of these is really remarkable.... i can immediately hear the lovely, unmatched melodic performance of the wind blowing thru the branches. However, due to my lineage, your "Celtic text message" sincerely spoke to me. on a more personal level.The hands-on, basic process of making paper is an amazing, creative art-form....ln a category all it's own!
My friend..these are some of your best--forest inspired ink....that inspires imaginations! They lifted my spirit with pleasurable smiles! Hugs of happy enjoyment!
...
Each and every one of these is really remarkable.... i can immediately hear the lovely, unmatched melodic performance of the wind blowing thru the branches. However, due to my lineage, your "Celtic text message" sincerely spoke to me. on a more personal level.The hands-on, basic process of making paper is an amazing, creative art-form....ln a category all it's own!
My friend..these are some of your best--forest inspired ink....that inspires imaginations! They lifted my spirit with pleasurable smiles! Hugs of happy enjoyment!
...
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5th Nov 2017 11:49pm
I get so much joy from the concept of raising you spirits - stoked
:-))))))))))))
Huge massive hugs :-) Thank you :-)
:-))))))))))))
Huge massive hugs :-) Thank you :-)
Re. Forest Inspired Haikus 7.0
4th Nov 2017 8:29pm
excellent work, man. I think you have the Haikus down pretty well. Another entertaining read from you. I always enjoy reading your poems
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Re: Re. Forest Inspired Haikus 7.0
5th Nov 2017 11:50pm
thank you so much you are a very loyal friend :-)
One day I'll be as good as you :-)
One day I'll be as good as you :-)
Re. Forest Inspired Haikus 7.0
4th Nov 2017 9:31pm
my heart lives in the forest
so I love this..
"(vi) Good Tunes
I applaud the woods
The wind whistles through the trees
Magical flutes "
no better music on Earth..
beautiful..
~Raven
so I love this..
"(vi) Good Tunes
I applaud the woods
The wind whistles through the trees
Magical flutes "
no better music on Earth..
beautiful..
~Raven
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5th Nov 2017 3:51am
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Anonymous
6th Nov 2017 6:34pm
David my friend, I look forward to the day after your forest outings for this very reason...
"(vi) Good Tunes
I applaud the woods
The wind whistles through the trees
Magical flutes"
Perfect!
Sending warm fuzzies for the sake of payback in your direction!
xoxo Taryn
"(vi) Good Tunes
I applaud the woods
The wind whistles through the trees
Magical flutes"
Perfect!
Sending warm fuzzies for the sake of payback in your direction!
xoxo Taryn
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Re. Forest Inspired Haikus 7.0
6th Nov 2017 7:23pm
Re: Re. Forest Inspired Haikus 7.0
Meooooooooow!
I bow to your expertise, having said that you are wrong :-)
the paper and the charcoal were made as the Celts would have done - it's their recipies, you'll have to take it up with them
I bow to your expertise, having said that you are wrong :-)
the paper and the charcoal were made as the Celts would have done - it's their recipies, you'll have to take it up with them