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On Paper
He was good in a poem,
Not for any one person
Like rain,
On a hot day
A warm blanket,
On a chilly day
He looked good on paper,
Even with words crossed out
That's what made him real,
His imperfections
Not being able to hide,
Within the shadows
Not for any one person
Like rain,
On a hot day
A warm blanket,
On a chilly day
He looked good on paper,
Even with words crossed out
That's what made him real,
His imperfections
Not being able to hide,
Within the shadows
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7th Nov 2017 1:53am
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7th Nov 2017 1:54am
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4th Nov 2017 5:55am
Tommie, this is a simple yet profound tribute to a poet that embraces their true self. Brava!
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7th Nov 2017 1:55am
Re. On Paper
4th Dec 2018 9:54am
Wow! I don't believe I've ever read a person within spilled ink, like this.
Nicely done.....very much enjoyed
Nicely done.....very much enjoyed
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19th Dec 2018 7:37pm
Re. On Paper
30th Dec 2019 10:01pm
This is awesome. Such a beautiful love you speak of in this poem :)
Those imperfections are what make us unique...
Those imperfections are what make us unique...
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