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Bareback
Love doesn't burgeon
amid placid earth
from contented
circumstance
It's a combat Veteran
warring cowardice;
a skilled Survivor
of bloody chaos
Wild Horses
ridden bareback
~
For J - my greatest Love
and Teacher 💜
amid placid earth
from contented
circumstance
It's a combat Veteran
warring cowardice;
a skilled Survivor
of bloody chaos
Wild Horses
ridden bareback
~
For J - my greatest Love
and Teacher 💜
Published 1st Nov 2017
| Edited 2nd Nov 2017
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Anonymous
1st Nov 2017 10:46pm
I have great teacher that makes Love worth fighting for. 💜
1st Nov 2017 10:49pm
1st Nov 2017 11:09pm
I find that love
grows quite well
on the sofa actually
and we
struggle along .. :)
grows quite well
on the sofa actually
and we
struggle along .. :)
2nd Nov 2017 00:09am
Not sure as a man I'd wanna have my junk smashed on the bare back of a stallion lol... But hey this proclamation was sweetly stirring... :)
2nd Nov 2017 00:41am
2nd Nov 2017 00:44am
A beautifully constructed metaphor <3 And it's true...we bare all with that person.
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2017 00:52am
How loving to just be all you are with a lover.
2nd Nov 2017 2:18am
Riding bareback comes with risks, but nothing can beat that feeling of freedom that awakens every part of you to hold on and fly ... A beautiful metaphor for what love feels like ❤️
2nd Nov 2017 7:30am
so beautiful wild & uninhibted is your love
nothing can stop it or stand in its way
your loyalty to one another
has stamped out any cowardice..
fiercly beautiful love poem..
love Brenda
nothing can stop it or stand in its way
your loyalty to one another
has stamped out any cowardice..
fiercly beautiful love poem..
love Brenda
2nd Nov 2017 7:35am
free as the wind
is your love
unfettered & limitless
you have opened
to each other completely
bare & naked
finding each other beautiful..
this is a love we all search for
but few find..
wonderful..
~Raven
is your love
unfettered & limitless
you have opened
to each other completely
bare & naked
finding each other beautiful..
this is a love we all search for
but few find..
wonderful..
~Raven
2nd Nov 2017 11:58am
Your write paired with the image is felt so well by me and many others (by example of other comments) when it comes to the fierce rush of love's passions & commitments!
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
10th Nov 2017 9:39pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
12th Nov 2017 10:43pm
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