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Cum and dance wit me...
Hey Love...
cum and dance with me..
or simply cum spend some time
and take a chance wit me..
im thinkin dat
u da baddest that i eva did see..
its the sweetness of ur fruit
that got me shaken ur tree..
oooooooooooor..
u play da flower.
im da bumble bee.
u be da cook.
i be da meat.
cuuuuuum season me..
hell.
ill be Jack.
u be Jill..
meet me up on da hill.
next to da well
im pitchin pennies
wishin u naked when u see me..
hahaha... yo sexy ass be havin me on one...
8^/ dis be our LoversLane..
cum and dance with me..
or simply cum spend some time
and take a chance wit me..
im thinkin dat
u da baddest that i eva did see..
its the sweetness of ur fruit
that got me shaken ur tree..
oooooooooooor..
u play da flower.
im da bumble bee.
u be da cook.
i be da meat.
cuuuuuum season me..
hell.
ill be Jack.
u be Jill..
meet me up on da hill.
next to da well
im pitchin pennies
wishin u naked when u see me..
hahaha... yo sexy ass be havin me on one...
8^/ dis be our LoversLane..
Published 16th Sep 2011
| Edited 21st Sep 2011
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Anonymous
16th Sep 2011 2:42pm
Hope the pennies bought you your wish. I'm getting to know the ones that are for your missus and the ones that mean you have to write these! Doesn't really matter, they're all great. R.
19th Sep 2011 2:15am
Figured u would be able to tell the difference. I shouldnt have explained it to u before. See how good u really are at analyzing.. Sure that would have in vain cause yo ass read me like a paperback book.. Bd haven me peggd.. I hate it and love it all at the same time.. I reckon we are about to elevate each others talented pin.. Appreciate u Red. 8^/ red.
19th Sep 2011 00:00am
good flow ......... nice ryhme.........good plot points and playfulness. Wanting, waiting, getting close........very nice.
19th Sep 2011 2:05am
Thank u very much. Bibi.. Welcome to the radio in my head... Stop back by anytime.. 8^/ Pepperssss....
20th Jul 2012 3:16pm
...hahaha.. like i told Bibi.. welcome to the radio in my head.. i have absolutely no idea.. i just sit back and watch the show.. hopefully catch a few things and jot them down.. you should hear the shit i can't catch hold to.. mind blowing.. real talk.. thanks for the kind comment/observation Jaito.. 8^/ Red
