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Between my legs
between my legs
leave your hand of God
your discovery of fire
your curtain call
between my legs
leave your stampede
your coffee stain
your totem phase
between my legs
say your first white lie
steal from a loved one
start a war
between my legs
repent your sins
save your marriage
lose your mind
between my legs
close your eyes
reserve your plot
return my keys, and
close the door behind you
leave your hand of God
your discovery of fire
your curtain call
between my legs
leave your stampede
your coffee stain
your totem phase
between my legs
say your first white lie
steal from a loved one
start a war
between my legs
repent your sins
save your marriage
lose your mind
between my legs
close your eyes
reserve your plot
return my keys, and
close the door behind you
Published 31st Oct 2017
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31st Oct 2017 8:18am
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31st Oct 2017 11:56am
You've done it again, managing to say so much in ways smoother than a woman's sweet inner thighs.
That's nice writing. Please keep the words, etc., coming.
That's nice writing. Please keep the words, etc., coming.
31st Oct 2017 1:56pm
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31st Oct 2017 2:07pm
Wow, makes me want to be a woman, with that power...lol
31st Oct 2017 3:38pm
31st Oct 2017 5:40pm
31st Oct 2017 5:57pm
wow this is a powerful write
& the ending so final..
loved these lines..
"between my legs
repent your sins
save your marriage
lose your mind"
so much being said here
with a few chosen words
leaves my mind spinning..
fantastic read..
~Raven
& the ending so final..
loved these lines..
"between my legs
repent your sins
save your marriage
lose your mind"
so much being said here
with a few chosen words
leaves my mind spinning..
fantastic read..
~Raven
2nd Nov 2017 7:52am
Thank you Raven
It’s an honor to have you read my words. Spin away, I’ll catch you when you fall.
It’s an honor to have you read my words. Spin away, I’ll catch you when you fall.
2nd Nov 2017 7:52am
these lines got me excited..
"between my legs
say your first white lie
steal from a loved one
start a war"
so rebellious in nature
casting off societies niceties
& doing what you want..
wonderfully invigorating..
love Crim
"between my legs
say your first white lie
steal from a loved one
start a war"
so rebellious in nature
casting off societies niceties
& doing what you want..
wonderfully invigorating..
love Crim
2nd Nov 2017 7:56am
Thank you Crimsin
Glad I could excite, please feel free to cumback anytime. 💋
Glad I could excite, please feel free to cumback anytime. 💋
2nd Nov 2017 5:42pm
"your totem phase "
as a Scorpio this resonates on another level
as a whole this vibe
captivates and seeps completely
as a Scorpio this resonates on another level
as a whole this vibe
captivates and seeps completely
2nd Nov 2017 7:06pm
Thank you Naajir, that’s an honor coming from someone as accomplished as you.
3rd Nov 2017 5:28pm
......mmmmm, I spray my every warm, wet emotion in between your legs. Clever and sensual. Spicy. Loved it! ❤️
3rd Nov 2017 5:58pm
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7th Nov 2017 3:02am
"between my legs
leave your hand of God
your discovery of fire
your curtain call "
oh my... your tone in this piece is so alarmingly hot....
Makes one feel so nervous and hot of excitement..! lol
Now I yearn for a godly hand to burn up between MY legs
Wonderful..!
-H-
leave your hand of God
your discovery of fire
your curtain call "
oh my... your tone in this piece is so alarmingly hot....
Makes one feel so nervous and hot of excitement..! lol
Now I yearn for a godly hand to burn up between MY legs
Wonderful..!
-H-
7th Nov 2017 6:58pm
Thanks SourMelon. Every woman deserves a godly hand, and a little more, between her legs...lol
20th Nov 2017 7:36pm
Fantastic writing SINclinations
you're a sexual poet assassin with this write
there's not too much else to say other that whats already been said in previous comments
you brought everyone to there knees on this write
and that's exactly where you wanted us to be.
keep'em coming, well penned
you're a sexual poet assassin with this write
there's not too much else to say other that whats already been said in previous comments
you brought everyone to there knees on this write
and that's exactly where you wanted us to be.
keep'em coming, well penned
20th Nov 2017 8:46pm
11th Dec 2017 10:14pm
Yea but what if. Eye even ur legs is so delicious if can't leave??? Hhhmmmm now I have a Cum-numdrum... Lmao
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