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sunflower
sitting among the sunflowers
i quietly scribe poetry
on their petals
written in sunshine
that is emitted from the soul
delicate are the sighs
& whisperings
that spring from this source
like a gentle breeze
to tickle the senses
for them who inhale
my tender musings
while wandering
through these secret fields
i've engraved them
with love & compassion
to bring joy
on the loneliest of days
flowers for the soul
to gift smiles
for those who feel adrift
in a world that doesn't care
in these sunflower gardens
i leave pieces of me
to lead the way home
for any lost in the bramble
a flowery path back
to the sun
Published 28th Oct 2017
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28th Oct 2017 8:08pm
aw beautiful one i'm blushing you made my day.. as for your caliber of writing you are a unique blossom in the garden of poetry no other writes like you do & you are loved for this.. I think you shine & shimmer in your writes..
~Raven
~Raven
28th Oct 2017 8:10pm
Oh .,, Now look who’s blushing. Thanks Raven. That means the world to me ...
28th Oct 2017 10:33pm
Makes me wish it were spring and I could go out into the garden and listen to the flowers whisper this words.
Nice poetry this is.
Nice poetry this is.
2nd Nov 2017 3:01am
thank you beautiful Teri for such a lovely comment there is now a smile gracing my face :)
~Raven
~Raven
28th Oct 2017 11:15pm
2nd Nov 2017 3:02am
29th Oct 2017 1:19am
with my new found live for the natural world I just loved this unexpected poem - first class :-)
Hugs my friend :-)
Hugs my friend :-)
2nd Nov 2017 3:03am
thank you dearest poet yes i've heard natures beautiful voice in your poems & makes my heart light reading..
~Raven
~Raven
29th Oct 2017 8:35am
You do scribe delicate petals of poetry and praise, Raven! I could bask in your words as leaves falling from the autumn trees... your nature poems are my cup of tea!! :)
2nd Nov 2017 3:03am
thank you beautiful poetess for such a lovely comment gifting me smiles :)
~Raven
~Raven
Anonymous
31st Oct 2017 00:53am
Raven, just the vision you conjured of this amazing and breathtaking path which holds joy for those who need it...so beautiful a sentiment...lovely, lovely ink dear poetess...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
2nd Nov 2017 3:04am
thank you lovely poetess i'm so happy to have brought nature to life in this write :)
~Raven
~Raven
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28th Dec 2017 2:22am
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28th Dec 2017 3:53am
thank you graciously dearest poetess
I scribe on their petals
only in a metaphorical sense..
not really my favored to write
unless i'm really anxious
& seeking a place of peace
then I bring out my light
flowery pen..
& i scribe in the garden..
~Raven
I scribe on their petals
only in a metaphorical sense..
not really my favored to write
unless i'm really anxious
& seeking a place of peace
then I bring out my light
flowery pen..
& i scribe in the garden..
~Raven
