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"SLUT..."
Sweet as cotton candy, sexy too
Lovin' in her longin' ways
Ulterior motive, removin' the blues
Temptin' the appetite for days
Succulent, the fruit bare
Layerin' one's conscious full
Unwaiverin' her sexual glare
Total surrender, her infectious pull
Salacious beyond wildest fantasy
Lusciously lewd, pleasure assured
Ultimate desire, a wanton greed
Tantalizin' as she incinerates empty
N' Becomes the cure...lol
Published 26th Oct 2017
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26th Oct 2017 11:35pm
26th Oct 2017 11:42pm
Wow...lol well by all means, plz don't let me stop u lol...appreciate u much LDF..
27th Oct 2017 00:51am
dearest poet some sexy inking
to the one who fulfills all your desires..
~Raven
to the one who fulfills all your desires..
~Raven
27th Oct 2017 1:14am
27th Oct 2017 1:55am
I Love the vocabulary and rhyme in this. Nice and formed! I hope it's true for you.
27th Oct 2017 2:18am
Well u know we romantic dreamers are my dear...lol thank u so much for all u are... :)
Anonymous
27th Oct 2017 6:27am
You certainty of word play flows into a stimulating read. You have my attention dear poet ~_~
27th Oct 2017 10:08am
Aaaaawww...thank you! I'm happy to hear that, n appreciate you n very grateful for the RL add... :)
Anonymous
29th Oct 2017 4:00pm
Such a graceful way to describe a slut, i like the rhyming and it flows seemless. Now I wanna go pick up a slut lol. Like the pic too.
29th Oct 2017 4:08pm
Lol u do? Think you can drop her off at my spot when you've ate your fill? lmao... Thanks a bunch sweetie, appreciate it :)
Anonymous
29th Oct 2017 5:01pm
Haha sure can, she might be a little beat up though by the time I'm done so we might need to find a fresh one for yer
1st Nov 2017 10:31pm
Man...
this is....
very out there!! lol
My, what wondrous pleasures and imagination a girl can bring...
this is....
very out there!! lol
My, what wondrous pleasures and imagination a girl can bring...
1st Nov 2017 10:52pm
Out there? Not sure what u mean but
I am happy if u liked it... Thank u so much, it's very appreciated :)
I am happy if u liked it... Thank u so much, it's very appreciated :)
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