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Staged Dialogue
Him: There was a time
I was the lone swan in your lake...
Her: There was a time
I had a lake for swine....
Him: And all the times
you left your door unlocked for me?
Her: Was there a time
I ever gave you the key?
Director's Note: Attention to spacing!
Distance, as relative as it is,
always is;
that's why he'll never reach her...
I was the lone swan in your lake...
Her: There was a time
I had a lake for swine....
Him: And all the times
you left your door unlocked for me?
Her: Was there a time
I ever gave you the key?
Director's Note: Attention to spacing!
Distance, as relative as it is,
always is;
that's why he'll never reach her...
Published 26th Oct 2017
| Edited 25th Dec 2017
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26th Oct 2017 1:29pm
dearest Takis love this
clever & wry banter
between them
funny how differently
we sometimes see things..
great write..
love Crim
clever & wry banter
between them
funny how differently
we sometimes see things..
great write..
love Crim
26th Oct 2017 3:42pm
So many assumptions, so few realizations... (The way we have chosen to manage our circumstances...) Thank you so much, Crim!
Anonymous
26th Oct 2017 11:26pm
You're makine cry . dear Takis
27th Oct 2017 1:06am
27th Oct 2017 2:48am
dearest poet
that they are so far apart in thinking
is maddening & sad
especially for the gentlemen
who clearly loves her..
excellent write..
~Raven
that they are so far apart in thinking
is maddening & sad
especially for the gentlemen
who clearly loves her..
excellent write..
~Raven
27th Oct 2017 3:07am
Some think, some assume and you are a thinker who feels, and I thank you for that!
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Nov 2017 11:34am
1st Nov 2017 11:30am
lol, swines to swans....yep thats about right
trying to commit breaking and entering without
trust or the majic password, touch or code, eh?
but what really demanded my attention was
your attached note: """ Distance, as relative as it is,
always is;
that's why he'll never reach her...""
**left my mouth wide open, a (sigh) escaped
causing me to go back for a third, slicing through me deeper
WoooW
Takis, you clever-clever man ;)
trying to commit breaking and entering without
trust or the majic password, touch or code, eh?
but what really demanded my attention was
your attached note: """ Distance, as relative as it is,
always is;
that's why he'll never reach her...""
**left my mouth wide open, a (sigh) escaped
causing me to go back for a third, slicing through me deeper
WoooW
Takis, you clever-clever man ;)
