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Children of the sun!

 
 
 
Days of bright darkness...  
Full of light that brings sadness...  
Into their life of madness...  
Children of the Sun!  
 
Just as once death of others gave birth to new start...  
Now ceases HER pounding heart...  
Once it stops, she'll be torn appart!  
Children of the Sun!!  
 
With love, she watched her children rise...  
Ever since she brought life into their eyes!  
But today who stays, DIES!!  
Children of the Sun!!!  
 
All the love will soon smother!  
In Day brighter than any other!!  
Staring at their dying Mother!!!  
Children of the Sun!!!!  
 
 
 

Note: it should be read in a manner that corresponds with the " ! " - somewhat quietly at the beginning & shouting in the end. To well.... create stress & the feeling of danger coming closer in very fast pace and with inevitable doom in it's pockets....

Note2: this work is "technically" inspired by "Thomas Bergersen -
 Children of the Sun"
why am i adding note about a work being "technically" inspired by:  
i have been told that my work "Cold Sunshine" is alike the song "Clint Eastwood" from Gorrilaz (which is understandable as it was inspired by it) but as they are about very different things (cold sunshine is basicly about a man discusted by war so he sets cold-fusion bomb he devised) i didn'T make sure i included the note and thus have been called out for plagiarism (and i didn'T make sure because i didn't think that was necessery). From which i draw conclusion that perhaps my decission process of what is and what isn'T alike enough has big flaws, and thus am adding this note untill i -create a better system helping me to decide on- / -am deriberatelly told- whether the note should or shouldn't be there
Written by God-Is-In-The-Rain (Gregory Rain)
Published | Edited 14th Nov 2017
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