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'Blackened-Tears'
The embittered demons
chew at the innards
like market value meat
Chaffin' post-partum
impressions into
lacquered cynicism
Ever burrowin' yet another
inch deeper, in a quest
to uncover the existence
of true soul sufferage...
chew at the innards
like market value meat
Chaffin' post-partum
impressions into
lacquered cynicism
Ever burrowin' yet another
inch deeper, in a quest
to uncover the existence
of true soul sufferage...
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Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
24th Oct 2017 00:30am
In a very poetic manner, you touch upon very complex issues about our subconscious while questioning some (really horrific) effects of soul searching. It made me read it a few times... Excellent write!
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24th Oct 2017 00:35am
Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
24th Oct 2017 1:24am
really like the second stanza...had to read that powerful vision multiple times... cool digital ink-J
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Re: Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
24th Oct 2017 1:34am
As thanks so much bro! Grateful for your growing support...appreciate it :)
Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
24th Oct 2017 1:52am
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24th Oct 2017 1:56am
Thank you, though I'm aware it was dark I'm glad u liked it....your support is appreciated alot
Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
24th Oct 2017 2:15pm
Milton once said the most difficult journey a man could take would be into himself. This poem encapsulates that quote.
Well done, PoetikOne.
Well done, PoetikOne.
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Re: Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
24th Oct 2017 2:47pm
Thank you my dear friend ...I feel it is fitting that you made this comment, I don't expect to reply to anymore becuz I'm leaving... Appreciate you've done to spark my mind n support my ink...
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24th Oct 2017 3:19pm
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Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
24th Oct 2017 6:51pm
dearest poet this is some deep
soul searching ink
that we could find the answers to this part..
"to uncover the existence
of true soul sufferage..."
I too am forever seeking..
~Raven
soul searching ink
that we could find the answers to this part..
"to uncover the existence
of true soul sufferage..."
I too am forever seeking..
~Raven
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Re: Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
24th Oct 2017 6:56pm
Thank you sweetness... you too huh? guess I shouldn't feel like the lone ranger anymore then :) appreciate u much
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24th Oct 2017 7:06pm
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Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
25th Oct 2017 10:12pm
Our biggest monsters lurk within us...so many minotaurs in our labyrinth. A brilliant self examination P.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Anonymous
26th Oct 2017 8:42am
Where the hell do you think your going. It would be nice to have you and your poetry around .
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Re: Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
26th Oct 2017 11:06am
Aaawww...too sweet u are... I'm gonna try n hang around for a Lil more... but I do thank u much :)
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Re: Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
27th Oct 2017 3:53am
Your description scared me lol...
guess ur right though n I appreciate u my dear one ...
guess ur right though n I appreciate u my dear one ...
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27th Oct 2017 1:42pm
Re: Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
27th Oct 2017 1:52pm
Hi my dear!! So long since I've heard from u...happy to see ur visit.. thank u, appreciate u always :)
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Anonymous
29th Oct 2017 4:04pm
This certainly hit familiar notes, intense read
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29th Oct 2017 4:13pm
I'd like to wish you didn't have familiarity with it, but I do feel grateful for your support
Re. 'Blackened-Tears'
30th Oct 2017 5:08pm
poe this struck some deep chords with me
lot of dark introspection that resonates.
exceptional ink
xo
lot of dark introspection that resonates.
exceptional ink
xo
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30th Oct 2017 7:41pm