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There's Magic in...
Her name...
in the ear, he
can hear...
It rings like a bell
the sound, allures
n' adheres...a super gel
A face illuminatin'
'sight beams'
her light, bright as sun...
She, angel... thank God
he's felt the embrace of one
hearin' her voice, soothe
the depths of the poetic soul
genuine, reelin' feelin'
the kindness
of this woman,
whole...
As he falls victim,
to a dazed dream...
he can imagine
her love burst
from the seams...
internally n' externally
a beauty, a Goddess
within thy eyes,
sear'd precious heart
she's the sweetest poetry
a pen could ever hope to kiss...
in the ear, he
can hear...
It rings like a bell
the sound, allures
n' adheres...a super gel
A face illuminatin'
'sight beams'
her light, bright as sun...
She, angel... thank God
he's felt the embrace of one
hearin' her voice, soothe
the depths of the poetic soul
genuine, reelin' feelin'
the kindness
of this woman,
whole...
As he falls victim,
to a dazed dream...
he can imagine
her love burst
from the seams...
internally n' externally
a beauty, a Goddess
within thy eyes,
sear'd precious heart
she's the sweetest poetry
a pen could ever hope to kiss...
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Re. There's Magic in...
23rd Oct 2017 10:06pm
Re: Re. There's Magic in...
23rd Oct 2017 10:11pm
Omgoodness, you gonna give me a cavity, being so sweet...lol...thank you my dear lady, I'm grateful as always for the continued support... :)
Re. There's Magic in...
"she's the sweetest poetry
a pen could ever hope to kiss"
What majestic ink flows onto your pages, the icing on a well prepared delight.
a pen could ever hope to kiss"
What majestic ink flows onto your pages, the icing on a well prepared delight.
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Re: Re. There's Magic in...
23rd Oct 2017 10:27pm
Aaawww thank u sweetheart....flattered big time! :) appreciate u greatly...
Re. There's Magic in...
23rd Oct 2017 10:28pm
Re: Re. There's Magic in...
23rd Oct 2017 10:33pm
Well, Ahavati you know as well as me how time is fleeting soooooo...lol...I am deeply blessed for your support, always :)
Re. There's Magic in...
23rd Oct 2017 10:42pm
Bravo! This is a Poet's poem...it mesmerizes and tantalizes all of the senses.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. There's Magic in...
23rd Oct 2017 10:50pm
Dude, wow...that's a great compliment, n I'm honored you felt that way about it...truly, thank u bunches for the support :)
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2017 00:06am
PM!!! Such a lovely ode! Just lovely 😊 I’m smiling huge with this one and I hope she is too!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. There's Magic in...
24th Oct 2017 00:09am
Re. There's Magic in...
24th Oct 2017 1:49am
This is really amazing..!! Very very, VERY delightful work...
A very....breathtaking affection that is so easy to see....
Truly love this one :)
A very....breathtaking affection that is so easy to see....
Truly love this one :)
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Re: Re. There's Magic in...
24th Oct 2017 1:53am
So OK, u have me smiling ear to ear...so thank u sweetie, truly grateful :)
Re. There's Magic in...
24th Oct 2017 2:39am
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24th Oct 2017 3:27am
Re. There's Magic in...
24th Oct 2017 11:59am
Wow, such a lovely angel, I would love her too. Very beautiful piece! Add it to my RL.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. There's Magic in...
24th Oct 2017 12:27pm
Aaawww *bowing to you* for the honor...deeply grateful my sweet RJ... you're the best. :)
Re. There's Magic in...
25th Oct 2017 7:57am
damn this is beautiful.
especially the last two stanzas..
bro you ARE definitely your namesake!!
especially the last two stanzas..
bro you ARE definitely your namesake!!
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Re: Re. There's Magic in...
25th Oct 2017 12:21pm
Dagg bro...this comment is very generous, n I'm very flattered...truly, always grateful for u kid...
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Anonymous
26th Oct 2017 8:45am
You can romance my mind with your words anytime. This is pure foreplay ;P
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Re: Re. There's Magic in...
26th Oct 2017 11:09am
Wow...don't tempt me woman! lol... Truly, again I'm grateful, n humbled...appreciate you bunches... :)
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27th Oct 2017 3:30am
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27th Oct 2017 3:40am
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Re: Re. There's Magic in...
3rd Nov 2017 10:12am
Aaaawwwww you precious woman...thank you!! I'm beyond flattered, n deeply grateful... :)