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The Drop
Blended palettes pour
muted susurrations slip skyward
Ash passes-
dour breath enlivens what's...
left
Overcasting cogent columns
coating in gray-
the cold...
our hiemal holdfast
Published 21st Oct 2017
| Edited 20th Nov 2017
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21st Oct 2017 10:34pm
22nd Oct 2017 2:54am
Thank you my fair lady! I hope people kind of interpret this as the will, it's intentionally vague, but still slightly concerning the dark throes of this season.
22nd Oct 2017 5:58pm
Learned two new words... susurrations and hiemal... Very cool brevity, I like :)
22nd Oct 2017 10:02pm
"susurrations" " hiemal" here I go again to my faithful old dictionary (lol) I love your poetry and I love having to work for its gems :-)
22nd Oct 2017 10:35pm
Anonymous
28th Oct 2017 6:10am
AtoMik.. truly brilliant.. love your art, and powerful expression.. you got skills.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
28th Oct 2017 6:20pm
