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Massacre of my heart
I lie here til the moon dissappears
Cry here i thought there were no more tears
A heart mistreated
Savagely mauled
Wondering where exactly i went wrong.
I miss your kiss at times
Saltiness of tears
That thoughts declined
I think of our hands intertwined
I remember atleast i tried
I wanted you to be the one
This game of love sure isnt fun
Hold my bloodgeoned heart as the tears run
Well baby i guess you won.
Cry here i thought there were no more tears
A heart mistreated
Savagely mauled
Wondering where exactly i went wrong.
I miss your kiss at times
Saltiness of tears
That thoughts declined
I think of our hands intertwined
I remember atleast i tried
I wanted you to be the one
This game of love sure isnt fun
Hold my bloodgeoned heart as the tears run
Well baby i guess you won.
Published 21st Oct 2017
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21st Oct 2017 2:46pm
22nd Oct 2017 9:50am
I KNOW THE FEELING TOO! Dope poem! I feel yo pain! Beautiful imagery of saltiness of tears hun! Good way of releasin' pain through poetry! I know you meant to spell it as "bludgeoned". Nice rhyme scene. A suggestion--maybe putting periods at the end of your sentences may make your poem sound more smoothly. Other than that, I like it!
