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Beneath The Surface
these
words here
are not meant to
undress you
they are meant to
unmask you
...
cuz as a man
i can't even begin
to imagine
all the things
swirling in your mind
heavy on your mind
...
the things
you gracefully
hold together
with a simple smile
...
the weight
you must carry daily
upon
your cheek bones
...
how you find
the strength
put your face together
to face
yet another day
...
just want you
to know
i see you
and
i admire you
Published 19th Oct 2017
| Edited 22nd Oct 2017
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Anonymous
19th Oct 2017 9:15pm
This is an incredible message to share with someone. Well worth holding onto! Much respect for you and your quill
20th Oct 2017 00:26am
dearest poet this took the weight off my shoulders
the heaviness I carry deep sigh
you are a soul soldier
pen on brother
you make the world brighter..
~Raven
the heaviness I carry deep sigh
you are a soul soldier
pen on brother
you make the world brighter..
~Raven
Anonymous
20th Oct 2017 9:24am
Such an uplifting message delivered beautifully. The world needs more people like this...
Anonymous
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20th Oct 2017 4:40pm
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21st Oct 2017 6:38am
Anonymous
8th Nov 2017 10:38pm
Dude !
So much respect for awrite like this.
To whom it is written, I know she appreciates you.
So much respect for awrite like this.
To whom it is written, I know she appreciates you.
