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The waiting
The fear
Creeping
Slowly inside
Consuming everything
My thoughts
My smile no longer my own
Owned by the unknown
50/50
Life and death hangs in
the balance
One second
Changes your life
But hope
Still lingers
I hope
I pray
That everything will
be ok
Only time
Will tell
Father time
Be gentle with me
My heart cannot break
Anymore
Creeping
Slowly inside
Consuming everything
My thoughts
My smile no longer my own
Owned by the unknown
50/50
Life and death hangs in
the balance
One second
Changes your life
But hope
Still lingers
I hope
I pray
That everything will
be ok
Only time
Will tell
Father time
Be gentle with me
My heart cannot break
Anymore
Published 13th Oct 2017
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13th Oct 2017 11:10am
Love puts no more upon us than we can handle. . . and Time absorbs the pain.
Heartfelt prayer, Sami.
Heartfelt prayer, Sami.
13th Oct 2017 2:26pm
I hear you it can get loud up in here pain and sorrow just suck and the light is hard to find sometimes 😊
13th Oct 2017 4:47pm
You have expressed he battle perfectly.
Don't give up Sami! No matter what others have done, don't blame yourself.
I still believe I will find love and I think good hearts can find each other through the fog...
JJ
Don't give up Sami! No matter what others have done, don't blame yourself.
I still believe I will find love and I think good hearts can find each other through the fog...
JJ
18th Oct 2017 11:48am
Thank you for your feedback everyone.
This time it's not love I have the issue with lol
More health but fingers crossed everything will work out xx
This time it's not love I have the issue with lol
More health but fingers crossed everything will work out xx
