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In The Dark
In the dark
what do you see in the mirror?
In the dark
do you need peripheral vision?
In the dark
are you farther removed from reality?
In the dark
does pinching yourself feel the same?
In the dark
do you sense what falls is not hale?
In the dark
does the dance fast approaching have a shape?
what do you see in the mirror?
In the dark
do you need peripheral vision?
In the dark
are you farther removed from reality?
In the dark
does pinching yourself feel the same?
In the dark
do you sense what falls is not hale?
In the dark
does the dance fast approaching have a shape?
Published 4th Oct 2017
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2017 4:35pm
What?! This is insanely thought worthy, yes.
If it provokes thought, I may be finally able to place a foot on the first step of poetry's ladder...
Anonymous
4th Oct 2017 4:56pm
Well, what are you waiting for dear? ;) Though I feel the same.
Anonymous
4th Oct 2017 11:48pm
Ah yes love it! ;)
5th Oct 2017 00:52am
Thank you! (I'm looking for a meaning for the word "Mangata", with no luck. The only thing I could think - far fetched, it's true - is Man/Cat, Gata in a couple of languages means cat.)
5th Oct 2017 00:55am
this is a multi-layered poem that causes one to ponder
wonderful depth a very excellent write..
love Crim
wonderful depth a very excellent write..
love Crim
5th Oct 2017 2:35am
