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Unplug me
Just for a day or two
or maybe even a week
perhaps longer
unplug me
un-tv me
un-computer me
un-download me
un-message me
un-upload me
un-phone me
un-facebook me
un-friend me
un-blackberry me
un-ipod me
un-iphone me
un-application me
un-grid me
then come over for a chat
and share yourself with me :)
or maybe even a week
perhaps longer
unplug me
un-tv me
un-computer me
un-download me
un-message me
un-upload me
un-phone me
un-facebook me
un-friend me
un-blackberry me
un-ipod me
un-iphone me
un-application me
un-grid me
then come over for a chat
and share yourself with me :)
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un-friend?
13th Sep 2011 11:44am
UN-iPHONE???? Oh nooooooo!
Well, wait now, that last part sounds kina nice. Would i, could I, let go of my phone?
I think that part about sharin myself with you sounds like a step in the right direction. Lemme just go check my email one more time and I'll be right over.
Well you didn't say un-email me... HA!
I love this, it really has somehow become a plugged in wireless world.
Well, wait now, that last part sounds kina nice. Would i, could I, let go of my phone?
I think that part about sharin myself with you sounds like a step in the right direction. Lemme just go check my email one more time and I'll be right over.
Well you didn't say un-email me... HA!
I love this, it really has somehow become a plugged in wireless world.
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re: un-friend?
Thank you for your comment. Notice at the beginning of the poem I put a time frame on it, meaning it would not last forever. Just a little time without all those distractions to focus on what's really important like face to face time with someone you care about. And you're right I didn't say un-email me... :)
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13th Sep 2011 2:26pm
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re: Lol
14th Sep 2011 6:32am
The meaning you read into it was not the one I had intended. The poem is really more about the newest
technology everybody gets so absorbed in. Nothing against technology per se; it has its useful and beneficial aspects, it just seems people are going overboard with it at times. :)
technology everybody gets so absorbed in. Nothing against technology per se; it has its useful and beneficial aspects, it just seems people are going overboard with it at times. :)
re: re: Lol
14th Sep 2011 10:57pm
I often feel like I am in the Matrix. Now unplugging there means disconnecting from technology and waking up to reality, but fortunately, we are not in the Matrix, or are we?
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re: re: re: Lol
15th Sep 2011 6:34am
These days I often feel like I'm in Wonderland and
the Matrix too sometimes. But what is reality really? Something that could be debated at length
I'm sure... The older I've gotten the more the concept of reality keeps changing for me. Anyway,
always love your comments. lol
the Matrix too sometimes. But what is reality really? Something that could be debated at length
I'm sure... The older I've gotten the more the concept of reality keeps changing for me. Anyway,
always love your comments. lol
Non conformity
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13th Sep 2011 7:56pm
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re: Non conformity
14th Sep 2011 6:44am
Thank you. I appreciate your comment and I too know how to use paper and pen. Love the word "texting zombies". How appropriate. Nice to hear from you -- I am actually getting ready to comment on one of your poems. :)
Re: Unplug me
6th Jul 2012 8:16pm