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Between Two Worlds
Connecting but not locked in
A loner moves inbetween the lines
It takes courage to live outside the box
Comforted though by bits of human engagement
Dylan said it best
"To live outside the law you must be honest"
Somehow those words ring true for this cowboy
Dark streets on the edge of the industrial zone
A lone light leading to the halal cart
Chicken over rice in a whirlwind of scent
Maybe it's the spices and just enough conversation
Or just maybe, it's something else .....
A loner moves inbetween the lines
It takes courage to live outside the box
Comforted though by bits of human engagement
Dylan said it best
"To live outside the law you must be honest"
Somehow those words ring true for this cowboy
Dark streets on the edge of the industrial zone
A lone light leading to the halal cart
Chicken over rice in a whirlwind of scent
Maybe it's the spices and just enough conversation
Or just maybe, it's something else .....
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30th Sep 2017 10:50pm
Re. Between Two Worlds
1st Oct 2017 1:50am
You always speak such simple truths about your life. I love the glimpses you show us.
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
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Anonymous
1st Oct 2017 2:23am
Truth my friend
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Re. Between Two Worlds
2nd Oct 2017 7:11am
Powerful ink PS...as Nietzsche said...strong people make their path in life...they create values...
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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2nd Oct 2017 1:10pm
Sometimes I wonder where these poems come from ..... Thx Harry, always appreciate your wisdom ....
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Anonymous
2nd Oct 2017 4:26pm
A bit of magic in this one. And that ending...love it!
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Re: Re. Between Two Worlds
2nd Oct 2017 10:55pm
I never expected too many comments on this one, it always surprises me when that happens ..... Thx
Re. Between Two Worlds
4th Oct 2017 11:12pm
dearest Poet I could lose myself in this place
you described so wonderfully..
between two worlds hmm pure brilliance..
love you..
Brenda
you described so wonderfully..
between two worlds hmm pure brilliance..
love you..
Brenda
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4th Oct 2017 11:15pm
It's kinda of a re-write from a long ago poem of similar nature. Love those industrial zones. ....xx