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Apathy
Some misconstrue my nature for apathy.
Be assured it is not.
For it is only the sight and sound
of cogs interlocking as the gears
within my mind slowly turn before
the clutch engages the mouth.
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Re. Apathy
30th Sep 2017 4:17am
I can think of many who should pause and ponder before operating the machinery of the mouth...
Well said, so you musta got it in gear...
JJ
Well said, so you musta got it in gear...
JJ
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Re: Re. Apathy
30th Sep 2017 4:27am
I try, but there are times when they either slip or jam with regrettable consequences.
Thanks as always JJ
Thanks as always JJ
Re. Apathy
30th Sep 2017 5:21am
This was really powerful. Your poetry really makes me think.
Nice write!
Nice write!
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Re: Re. Apathy
30th Sep 2017 5:46am
If it is as you say, then my mission has been accomplished. To think, is to grow. Thank You for the compliment, for it warms the heart.
Re: Re. Apathy
30th Sep 2017 5:49am
Re. Apathy
30th Sep 2017 9:13am
yup, the 'veil' of apathy, a useful tool to allow enough time for the truth to reveal itself...then engage slip n rip...or the cold, hard, stare.
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Re: Re. Apathy
30th Sep 2017 9:31am
Yes, the calm before the storm or the saving of face from words misplaced. Thank You for the visit and insightful words.LR
Re. Apathy
30th Sep 2017 11:48am
Misconstrue they do indeed.
Perception does also play a part, and well machinery is bound to malfunction or perhaps underfunction sometimes.. And well conseuqnces..they have their own league!
Expression effective.
Perception does also play a part, and well machinery is bound to malfunction or perhaps underfunction sometimes.. And well conseuqnces..they have their own league!
Expression effective.
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Re: Re. Apathy
Reflecting
before
Projecting
is most times more
Affecting
Thanks my friend, the visit and comment as always Effecting.
before
Projecting
is most times more
Affecting
Thanks my friend, the visit and comment as always Effecting.
Re. Apathy
Anonymous
30th Sep 2017 1:30pm
My mouth is often twin turbo supercharged in the speed of things that flow from it. Lol.
Well done piece!
Well done piece!
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Re: Re. Apathy
LOL As long as the words are high octane and the message delivered is on track, it matters not the speed of the hole shot.
Your comment makes me smile my friend.
Thanks for being here.
Your comment makes me smile my friend.
Thanks for being here.