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Lymphatic
The mouthy moon
Molds
And melds
As aged cheeses
Ripening through
It's arcing stages
Mists mask these
Days - crisp
While I wilt
Listless
Molds
And melds
As aged cheeses
Ripening through
It's arcing stages
Mists mask these
Days - crisp
While I wilt
Listless
Published 28th Sep 2017
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28th Sep 2017 11:19pm
28th Sep 2017 11:42pm
Anonymous
29th Sep 2017 11:23pm
AtoMik.. nice..
Dave
Dave
30th Sep 2017 7:40pm
I always like to give honest critique and whilst I marvel at the beauty of your words - it lost me :-)
30th Sep 2017 7:44pm
Admittedly I vacillated over posting this or not, because I thought it would lose people :) It's very vague. I don't expect it to understood as it's very subjective. I always appreciate critique!
