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death of arrogance
i call to the deities
free me on this day
let my shackels fall to my feet
may my soul shine bright
i feel like a blow up doll
with a fart inside
foul & of no good use
cleanse me of the shadows
& dirtiness that confounds
i've been arrogant in days past
now i'm brought low
the gutter isn't a long way to fall
when you're already on the curb
don't let me tumble further
down the hole of destruction
the devil is pissing on me
& i've opened my mouth to receive him
i reek of self deceit
let me taste a new day
one shame free
i've ridden this wild horse
far too long
it's time to write a new chapter
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Re. death of arrogance
28th Sep 2017 4:13pm
A humbling write Bren. A hopeful plea for help... rising up always starts with a determination to break free of our own shackles! Great write!!
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. death of arrogance
28th Sep 2017 4:17pm
thank you JJ sometimes we can't write anything but what we feel.. I hope to be writing new chapter for me soon.. love Brenda
Re. death of arrogance
28th Sep 2017 4:23pm
Holy shit...this was very dark, raw, n powerful. A signature Crimson original!!
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Re: Re. death of arrogance
28th Sep 2017 4:29pm
Re. death of arrogance
Anonymous
28th Sep 2017 4:51pm
Then write your write you shall!!! Of that, I have no doubt !!

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Re: Re. death of arrogance
28th Sep 2017 5:26pm
Re. death of arrogance
28th Sep 2017 10:21pm
Some of those lines are quite funny crimbear
But you held the meaning strong
It's good to be humbled babe shit that's my whole interval
But you held the meaning strong
It's good to be humbled babe shit that's my whole interval
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Re: Re. death of arrogance
28th Sep 2017 10:35pm
thank you Quiet One yeah I guess it is pretty funny in places :) the humbling is painful.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts.. love Crim
Re. death of arrogance
Anonymous
29th Sep 2017 11:42pm
Brenda.. an awakening, of the soul.. to fight for a better tomorrow.. a new chapter indeed.. your ink, always makes my mind rise towards a better sense of reason and understanding.. simply beautiful.. love you, my sister..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. death of arrogance
4th Oct 2017 5:59pm
thank you dearest Dave I love you my brother may we rise together poets forever united.. love Brenda
Re. death of arrogance
Anonymous
30th Sep 2017 11:18pm
My love, new chapters get written when needed, your words help me stay focused on that very goal...however, to compare yourself to a blow up doll, with nothing other than a fart inside, ohhhhhhh, no, no, no My Beautiful Brenda...never in a million years...they are dispensable...you however, are not....never lose sight of all that you are to everyone around you but moreso, to me....
I love you madly, deeply
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
I love you madly, deeply
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn

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Re: Re. death of arrogance
4th Oct 2017 6:02pm
thank you my love I will do my very best to stay focused & not let depression win out like it tried to on this day.. my blow up doll with a fart inside was kind of an attempt at finding humor in the way I felt this day.. with you by my side their are always brighter days to look forward to.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda
Re. death of arrogance
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2017 2:34pm
Beautiful one, I find it ironic that you expressed your pain and misery with such sneaky peeks of humor. Even your muse is telling you you're more than you believe. It's just an observation, but even if you hit that gutter, you can still pull yourself back up to the curb...and from there it's up up up. And sometimes that rise is easier with a hand to help you. You are exquisite in your beauty - inside and out. Your greatest critic is always going to be you, beautiful. So much love for you...so much

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Re: Re. death of arrogance
4th Oct 2017 6:03pm
thank you lovely one yes I was employing humor to describe how I was feeling.. there is always up yes beautiful lady you are right.. you are deeply appreciated.. love you lady.. Crim