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All Things Taken for Granted
Eyes fall down
Faded in dreams
Washed in tears
Worn out seams
Split open & spill
Visual extremes
Explicit gore surrounds
No love, no respect
Only laughing faces
Only another suspect
Tattered ghosts afloat
Breathe me awake
Slit my ungrateful throat.
Faded in dreams
Washed in tears
Worn out seams
Split open & spill
Visual extremes
Explicit gore surrounds
No love, no respect
Only laughing faces
Only another suspect
Tattered ghosts afloat
Breathe me awake
Slit my ungrateful throat.
Published 26th Sep 2017
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26th Sep 2017 12:30pm
I feel like I am in limbo here, looking through the darkness of a waking dream into a light far away. Interesting imagery evoked with your words, although it may not be what you meant to convey. Love your write as always, anonshadow.
27th Sep 2017 00:00am
Poetry is what the reader says, I'm always happy to hear the way it came across to you. Thank you very much for reading and leaving your thoughts, Grace. ~anonshadow
26th Sep 2017 11:18pm
27th Sep 2017 00:02am
Humbling words, I appreciate the acclaim, I am undeserving to be sure. Thank you for reading me, cold, appreciated as always. ~anonshadow
Anonymous
29th Sep 2017 11:55pm
Intriguing write. Deep. I like :)
30th Sep 2017 2:01pm
Glad you thought so! I thank you for your words of kindness:) ~anonshadow
