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Cognitive Functions - Extraverted Intuition
Scopic ectopic stairways span spotlit insights
Hitting harried hunches at midnight
I'd prefer ventures - vibrant; than silent settled waters
To swim in salient swells
Wise wanderer
Please wonder
Prime ponderer
Press yonder
I take aventuresome aims for airy tradewinds
And fashionable straits
Open-ended eyes espy
All the pretty ideas paving the sky
Circuit-breaking routes - staccato
Pulled into abstract undertow
Frenetic flitting fits
Arteries split input currents, routing rushing rivulets
Sharp insomnia setbacks, waylay wayfaring verdicts
Weighing the fruits of future flashbacks
Published 25th Sep 2017
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25th Sep 2017 9:33pm
28th Sep 2017 3:51am
Lord, AtomikOne. Your gift for insight is second only to that of expression.
I am in the midst of shooting a conference right now (not to mention working 10 hours a day ), add a two hour commute with traffic. And I have to throw some writing in or go insane!
However, when I get through this week, I'm going to sit down very soon with your work and do a formal critique.
You're one very talented poet.
I am in the midst of shooting a conference right now (not to mention working 10 hours a day ), add a two hour commute with traffic. And I have to throw some writing in or go insane!
However, when I get through this week, I'm going to sit down very soon with your work and do a formal critique.
You're one very talented poet.
28th Sep 2017 4:25pm
Oh gosh, thank you <3 This one was a bit easier naturally for me because it's my 2nd function, and the way I pick up information.
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- Edited 13th Sep 2022 5:45pm
1st Oct 2017 2:18am
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1st Oct 2017 2:57am
I actually do like some hardcore stuff! I even had a Meshuggah stage for a while because it was so different and captivating, and really good lyrics are hard to come by sometimes (although hardcore, metal and hard rock tend to be better). Thanks! :)
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Sep 2022 5:45pm
1st Oct 2017 3:55am
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"I'd prefer ventures - vibrant; than silent settled waters"
really sets the tone for this piece and in a way summarizes it too.
I have to reread so many times to make sense of this! :)
which is funny because i'm supposedly linked to this cog func.
really sets the tone for this piece and in a way summarizes it too.
I have to reread so many times to make sense of this! :)
which is funny because i'm supposedly linked to this cog func.
