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Forever Missing You
I haven't wrote my thoughts down in a while.
This distasteful life of mine has left me blank.
Missing you is all that I can think.
I don't want to let go of you, I want to keep reliving your face.
It was our destiny to be together but you died by mistake.
I couldn't save you and I hate myself because I wasn't there when you took your last breath.
I'll never forget the last of our time spent.
You gave me one last kiss as if you were saying goodbye.
I'll forever hold onto that moment it always makes me cry.
This distasteful life of mine has left me blank.
Missing you is all that I can think.
I don't want to let go of you, I want to keep reliving your face.
It was our destiny to be together but you died by mistake.
I couldn't save you and I hate myself because I wasn't there when you took your last breath.
I'll never forget the last of our time spent.
You gave me one last kiss as if you were saying goodbye.
I'll forever hold onto that moment it always makes me cry.
Published 25th Sep 2017
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25th Sep 2017 11:24am
They say time cures all, they say there is a proper grieving period for everything. You know, already, that it's often otherwise.
26th Sep 2017 4:15pm
8th Jun 2020 1:42am
Hi,
I think this is a really poignant and heartfelt write that anyone who has experienced loss could relate to. I would be thrilled if you would send an audio reading of this to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. I think people would benefit from hearing this and the feature may draw interest to your writing on site. If you would be interested, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the poem's title, to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
I think this is a really poignant and heartfelt write that anyone who has experienced loss could relate to. I would be thrilled if you would send an audio reading of this to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. I think people would benefit from hearing this and the feature may draw interest to your writing on site. If you would be interested, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the poem's title, to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
