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The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
Today I thought about trying
The evil voice in my head said
“What’s the fucking point?”
I thought about a healthy lifestyle
The evil voice in my head said
“Have a large fucking slice of pie.”
Today I thought about going to the gym
The evil voice in my head said
“Who the fuck is Jim, fuck him!”
It’s time to look after my diabetes
The evil voice in my head said
“Fuck! You don’t have legs already.”
I was going to try again and love her
The evil voice in my head said
“Fuck her! She doesn’t love you.”
I was gonna contact my long lost daughter
The evil voice in my head said
“Fuck her! She hates you too.”
I considered not drinking anymore
The evil voice in my head said
“You need more fuckin drink, not less.”
Today I considered suicide
The evil voice in my head said
“Best fuckin idea you’ve had all day.”
I said “fuck off! Ya dick!.”
The evil voice in my head said nothing
“I thought I just told you to fuck off?”
I goaded
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Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
David dark are the voices
i hear them too always coming for the throat
deep & dark write..
love & hugs Brenda
i hear them too always coming for the throat
deep & dark write..
love & hugs Brenda
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Re: Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
20th Sep 2017 5:08pm
I am gonna try something I haven't fully tried before - telling the negative voices both my own and that of others to "Fuck Right Off." - life is hard enough without these fuckers - Grrrrrrrrr big warm hugs :-)
Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
Anonymous
20th Sep 2017 6:00pm
If you need any help telling that voice to fuck off, let me know! I'm right beside you with my fists in the air, ready for the fight! You, my friend, are so worth the fight! So many hugs heading your way! :)
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Re: Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
21st Sep 2017 1:47am
my baseball bat will have to come out of retirement if this keeps up (lol) thanks for the offer :-) - Big Huge Hugs :-)
Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
The ending made me chuckle and smile. I'm glad you're not dead David!
A very interesting poem. We all have a dark side, some darker than others. I hope that evil voice loses those battles but I'm guilty as well. Unhealthy living has irreparably damaged my body as well. The stroke I had 5 years ago was the byproduct of years of giving in to that voice of endless temptation. The devil may not exist in Hell, but she sure as Hell exists in my mind!
Take care, we need you around here... don't be one of the disappeared!
JJ
A very interesting poem. We all have a dark side, some darker than others. I hope that evil voice loses those battles but I'm guilty as well. Unhealthy living has irreparably damaged my body as well. The stroke I had 5 years ago was the byproduct of years of giving in to that voice of endless temptation. The devil may not exist in Hell, but she sure as Hell exists in my mind!
Take care, we need you around here... don't be one of the disappeared!
JJ
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Re: Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
21st Sep 2017 1:49am
most of the time I am glad not to be dead too (lol) thank you for your very wise comments - you and I know things because of our experience - life can be hard and of course strange :-( Thank you my friend :-)
Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
20th Sep 2017 11:32pm
Those dark voices have a way of slipping in when your already feeling down ... sneaky little bastards ... throwing on the light switch makes them disappear without a trace, not always easy, but try we must !!
:)
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Re: Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
21st Sep 2017 1:55am
indeed - I have been called very trying lots (lol) Jimeny Cricket is an asshole, or at least mine is :-) thank you my friend :-)
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2017 00:27am
David, there are many times when those dark voices visit me as well...little fuckers...very hard to get the to just shut the hell up...I suppose it's either one or the other that gets them to for a bit of time, either the heart or the soul...I do so wonder which one it is at times....
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
21st Sep 2017 1:58am
for me it's the mind - they don't mind and I don't matter, to them. But I am trying to fight these fuckers now - enough is enough :-) thank you :-) Huge Big Hugs :-)
Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
21st Sep 2017 12:50pm
Bravo, David.
You have 17 seconds from the time a thought enters your mind to redirect it; to reach for a higher vibration from the negative.
Saying " Fuck You" would do it.
17 seconds. . .
You have 17 seconds from the time a thought enters your mind to redirect it; to reach for a higher vibration from the negative.
Saying " Fuck You" would do it.
17 seconds. . .
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Re: Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
21st Sep 2017 4:49pm
LOL - I didn't know that - 17 seconds huh? Maybe I should try and be more inventive seen as I have so much time - having dais that - fuck off with a Scottish accent seems to be working :-) glad you enjoyed the poem too - thank you :-)
Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
21st Sep 2017 5:28pm
All those vicious little voices...just waiting the perfect opportunity to bring torment, and chaos into our lives--always, it seems, when we are facing some of our most challenging, and complicated moments!
Indeed--it can be almost impossible to ignore them, as they are soo incredibly adept at gaining strength from all our negative emotions! But, my dear friend, i admire your "take-charge" attitude! And right now, i am picturing you pumping your fists in the air....and imagining the sound of your fierce Scottish brogue, telling your menacing little whisperers, to FUCK (right) OFF !!! (lol) :D
This leaves me with feelings of hope, and encouragement! ( Hundreds, and hundreds of huge HUGS heading your way!)
Indeed--it can be almost impossible to ignore them, as they are soo incredibly adept at gaining strength from all our negative emotions! But, my dear friend, i admire your "take-charge" attitude! And right now, i am picturing you pumping your fists in the air....and imagining the sound of your fierce Scottish brogue, telling your menacing little whisperers, to FUCK (right) OFF !!! (lol) :D
This leaves me with feelings of hope, and encouragement! ( Hundreds, and hundreds of huge HUGS heading your way!)
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Re: Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
21st Sep 2017 5:50pm
I have always thought the Scottish accent makes swear words come to life - the accent can come across as aggressive even when it's not (lol) - I am kinda beginning the fight back - so onwards and upwards :-) Thank you as always for your support, you really are a special friend :-) Huge HUGS!
Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
22nd Sep 2017 1:24am
Wow, I'm reduced to tears by this. You tell those voices to stay the fuck away! I'm happy you are fighting them David. :)
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Re: Re. The Voice - - - - Inspired by FromtheAsh
22nd Sep 2017 2:31am
sometimes fighting is all there is left to do :-) thank you for your support and welcome back :-)