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Re. Too wet to play
Anonymous
15th Sep 2017 8:54pm
Beautiful.
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Re. Too wet to play
16th Sep 2017 10:04am
Re: Re. Too wet to play
17th May 2021 5:52pm
Re. Too wet to play
16th Sep 2017 5:12pm
reminded me of my childhood when I loved to go out in the rain :-)
lovely Haiku :-)
lovely Haiku :-)
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Re. Too wet to play
16th Sep 2017 5:15pm
Re: Re. Too wet to play
17th May 2021 5:53pm
Re. Too wet to play
18th Sep 2017 4:24am
This is one wonderful haiku...has all the elements...that lonely feeling...a Basho delight.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. Too wet to play
17th May 2021 5:54pm
Thank you so much Harry for your delightful comments ... greatly appreciated
Peace,
JeJe
Peace,
JeJe
Re. Too wet to play
18th Sep 2017 4:47am
My heart is lonely when it's rainy, but I will do lots of thing to get rid of the feeling. Like the line "Thinking of things to be done". Felt it deeply...
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Re: Re. Too wet to play
17th May 2021 5:55pm
Thank you so much Rosejasmine for your thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated
JeJe
JeJe