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Floating Away
It's a little rough today
So let's strike a match
Pick our poison
Pierce the skin
It's our only option
To take us to another place
Until we figure out this mess
We're a lost cause already
Might as well ride the wave
Keep floating away
Then drown in this pain
So let's strike a match
Pick our poison
Pierce the skin
It's our only option
To take us to another place
Until we figure out this mess
We're a lost cause already
Might as well ride the wave
Keep floating away
Then drown in this pain
Published 12th Sep 2017
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13th Sep 2017 7:03am
It's rough today
So snuff that flame
Show it who's boss
The cause isn't lost
Make your choice
Pick your voice
It's okay
It's just a rough day
I feel like all of my "response" poems are sooo cheesy, I'm like trying to be encouraging but it comes out really cringey... hehe :p sorry if it's annoying
Nice write though, it delivers the feeling really well. I likes. <3
13th Sep 2017 10:49pm
it may be cheesy, but I like cheese ;) love your little response, glad you enjoyed it my dear Rose 🥀
14th Sep 2017 6:08am
14th Sep 2017 12:05pm
This self-fulfilling prophecy i know all too well, but i enjoyed reading your take on it.
thank you for sharing.
love and respect,
b
thank you for sharing.
love and respect,
b
15th Sep 2017 00:06am
Anonymous
16th Sep 2017 8:00pm
Fairy.. sometimes the truth tastes bitter.. better to be real, than transparent.. brilliant.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
17th Sep 2017 3:44am
Amen to that. Bitter or not, it needs to be said. Appreciate your comments and support
