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Adamantine
Unequivocal Source of One:
Our Absolute Oversouls
simultaneously Being at once
Multiples encountering choice
alternating dimensions of Life
based solely on the Poem
Ariadne's Thread forebearing;
an Adamantine bond surviving
millions of permutations
manifesting concurrently
So far from origin this home;
our light speed of travel
through millenniums, plus
a few thousand blueprints of womb
birthed and rebirthed flesh
Still, we've barely to touch
the surface of Our experience
Having partaken of that
But, O! Not this
No . . .
Not Yet
~
Our Absolute Oversouls
simultaneously Being at once
Multiples encountering choice
alternating dimensions of Life
based solely on the Poem
Ariadne's Thread forebearing;
an Adamantine bond surviving
millions of permutations
manifesting concurrently
So far from origin this home;
our light speed of travel
through millenniums, plus
a few thousand blueprints of womb
birthed and rebirthed flesh
Still, we've barely to touch
the surface of Our experience
Having partaken of that
But, O! Not this
No . . .
Not Yet
~
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Re. Adamantine
11th Sep 2017 00:24am
What an astounding exhibition of verbal acrobatics...you weave so wonderfully my dear friend. :)
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Thank you, PoetikOne! I truly appreciate your comments.
I know I'm behind on commenting. . .but promise to catch up this week! Been keeping a fire lit under Mr Blaze's latest project! As an artist you'll love it when he launches!
I know I'm behind on commenting. . .but promise to catch up this week! Been keeping a fire lit under Mr Blaze's latest project! As an artist you'll love it when he launches!
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11th Sep 2017 2:38am
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11th Sep 2017 2:52am
The only thing I'm projecting is his own unrecognized talent to the surface. 📖
Re: Re. Adamantine
11th Sep 2017 10:48am
I wasn't doin anything but Tryin to make u laugh sweetheart, I wouldn't care what anyone did n with whom....just joking with u is all...
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Re. Adamantine
I thought unequivocal absolutes ..
but, then again, I only
thought ..
and, then again,
I lost the thread ..
but that's just a minotaury matter,
he said .. :)
but, then again, I only
thought ..
and, then again,
I lost the thread ..
but that's just a minotaury matter,
he said .. :)
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Re: Re. Adamantine
11th Sep 2017 1:17am
LOL! I knew a man who died in the archives for losing the thread, Paul! But I'm glad you're still alive!
Re. Adamantine
Anonymous
11th Sep 2017 2:11am
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I Love the Ariadne's Thread reference.
I see us all as extensions of Source experiencing Life through us.
I see us all as extensions of Source experiencing Life through us.

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Re: Re. Adamantine
11th Sep 2017 2:21am
You would be exactly right. And for every choice, we either get hit by a Bronco or we're riding happily the other direction.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Especially the Ariadne's reference.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Especially the Ariadne's reference.
Re: Re. Adamantine
Anonymous
11th Sep 2017 2:47am
* thumb out * 💜 Going my way?

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Anonymous
11th Sep 2017 9:07am
Very true- excellent!

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Re: Re. Adamantine
12th Sep 2017 2:46pm
Thanks, Max. I've been looking for time to delve into your series and finally have a bit.
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Re: Re. Adamantine
7th Oct 2017 12:17pm
Readin' me like a newspaper, Sister! Appreciate the words, RL, and you muchly! ❤