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brute
he seems restless with deep lit eyes, bloomed
irises plead cessation from speeding vessel
some chillness spreads
dissolving suns and decimating airs, his
heart collects to still wait therein, scaling heights
despite no demands. a bundle of ignorance
one more day or two
he will stay
bled with cobwebbed lungs
handing fools his destiny
soul will swim away without a howl
Published 9th Sep 2017
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10th Sep 2017 9:44am
10th Sep 2017 3:26pm
am honoured to have you here dear adored evergreen poet...your words n art inspire as ev , tq :)
11th Sep 2017 1:10am
This is very powerful, Ima. A graceful letting go.
Cobwebbed lungs . . .what imagery.
So good to see you posting again.
Cobwebbed lungs . . .what imagery.
So good to see you posting again.
12th Sep 2017 3:09pm
Thank you..Ahavati dear. it was not just letting go, but something more i needed to say from the title & L10. now that not in light, let unsaid be unsaid.. need to sharpen reads n writes after so long in block. but..those immense pains swell to dissolve all spells. for more good inspite of all gone & going through. dunn mind my blabberings dear..juz felt like so:) tq fr constant presence & encouragements . luv xx
