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September Rain

The air  
thick and heavy  
a wet blanket
then the pressure changed
so slightly at first  
not many may have sensed it
it was as if the earth slowed
just a bit, the wind
rushed in
a cooling, refreshing breeze
suddenly right behind it
first flash of light
that lit up the entire room
clap of thunder
roared
bursting the night sky into a
water fall
Written by jemac
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