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Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
There was never night that couldn't chase away the sun.
We sing in the dark, the moon and I,
covetous of stars and reaching for illicit lovers.
Within the pale of an ivory tower, I listen for a cadre of outlaws.
The city is tangled in noir, most nights,
and the wind speaks in poems;
but I'm a reckless girl, deeper than shadows -
there's a dance somewhere, and a dancer.
Dancing, or running, or loving;
I'm a rider on a dangerous carousel
traversing the tragedy of an oblivious dancefloor -
the French say: si rien ne bouge.
Loneliness falls harder than a broken heart.
And having never loved is a glaring streetlamp
in a nameless alley, burning my eyes from gray to silver.
I am stripped bare among brick murals and cardboard bungalows.
Cimmerian shade -
if nothing moves but my heart,
as it beats with noir desir.
(Artist unknown)
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Re. Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
29th Aug 2017 6:45am
"I'm a rider on a dangerous carousel traversing the tragedy of an oblivious dancefloor" - ...objects bouncing experiences around...very nice...great job both of you...a good smelting....-J
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1st Sep 2017 8:45am
I have to give John the credit for that amazing line, he really is an incredible writer and I can't begin to say how much I enjoy our collabs. Thanks so much for reading...
Re. Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
29th Aug 2017 6:56am
"The city is tangled in noir, most nights,
and the wind speaks in poems; "
bravo lovely Kasai & John
we dance of your periphery
as spectators of the beauty & tempest love you shine..
love Crim
and the wind speaks in poems; "
bravo lovely Kasai & John
we dance of your periphery
as spectators of the beauty & tempest love you shine..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
1st Sep 2017 8:49am
Thanks so much, Crim, always enjoy your great comments. So glad you came to visit us, talented one...
Re. Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
29th Aug 2017 7:40am
this is a wild ride on a carousel, Kas,
noir in the city, the wind making poems...
noir in the city, the wind making poems...
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Re: Re. Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
29th Aug 2017 7:52am
It's always a wild ride, John, that's what makes it art, makes it beautiful. I enjoyed every minute of it...
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Re. Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
Anonymous
29th Aug 2017 3:23pm
Your voices breathe as one on the page and create such incredible beauty. Wind is poetry indeed.

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Re. Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
Anonymous
30th Aug 2017 2:32am
My Sweet Kasai, Dearest John....seamless, liquid-like fluidity...you always leave me in silence from beginning to end when your quills meet...stunning...much love to you both!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn

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Re: Re. Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
2nd Sep 2017 9:12am
So very sweet of you, Taryn. Always here with your beautiful comments and kind smiles. Thank you, lovely lady...
Re. Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
Anonymous
1st Sep 2017 8:35am
I'm a rider on a dangerous carousel - excellent line.
beautiful to read, thank you.
beautiful to read, thank you.

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Re: Re. Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
2nd Sep 2017 9:15am
John is a talented guy, his lines always amaze me. Thanks so much for visiting, Belindajane, it was very kind of you to comment...
Re. Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
16th Oct 2017 2:13am
Très apprécié! Vous faites une excellente équipe. La première strophe est vraiment impeccable.
Salutations poétiques à John également.
Salutations poétiques à John également.
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Re. Si rien ne bouge (with JohnFeddeler)
16th Oct 2017 3:47am
Ah, so glad you could appreciate this, Wolf, and impeccable is quite a compliment.
John is a true pleasure to write with, thanks so much for the great comment...
John is a true pleasure to write with, thanks so much for the great comment...