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Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
~ flow ~
smoothly crossing floor
a slow dance unraveling
sense of awareness
~ staccato ~
gyrating of hips
bouncing, grooving to the beat
feets don't fail me now
~ chaos ~
foot stomping wild moves
head shaking, limbs a kimbo
tangled in the threads
~ lyrical ~
just do your own thing
let your body move freely
so soft and gentle
~ stillness ~
quiet now, slow pulse
cascading onto the floor
closing eyes to rest
artist unknown
smoothly crossing floor
a slow dance unraveling
sense of awareness
~ staccato ~
gyrating of hips
bouncing, grooving to the beat
feets don't fail me now
~ chaos ~
foot stomping wild moves
head shaking, limbs a kimbo
tangled in the threads
~ lyrical ~
just do your own thing
let your body move freely
so soft and gentle
~ stillness ~
quiet now, slow pulse
cascading onto the floor
closing eyes to rest
artist unknown
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Re: Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
15th Sep 2017 2:55pm
Catching up on responding ... thank you so much AEMelia for the read and thoughtful comments ... you are exactly right ! Just found a teacher who offers this wonderful movement class ... loving every minute ox
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26th Aug 2017 9:35am
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15th Sep 2017 2:56pm
Thank you so much JohnFeddeler for the read and beautiful comments ... always appreciated
Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
26th Aug 2017 10:06am
There's nothing like watching the beauty of dance ... be it the ballet or dancing at a ballroom
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15th Sep 2017 2:57pm
Thank you so much LobodeSanPedro for the read and thoughtful comments .. I agree completely
Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
From the tango to the waltz; it's a beautiful dance in musical words JeJe. 💃
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Re: Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
15th Sep 2017 2:58pm
Thank you so much Ahavati for the read and thoughtful comments... always appreciated x
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Re: Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
15th Sep 2017 3:00pm
Thank you so much Dani... for the read and beautiful comments ... Latin dancing, so much fun ! I had a fabulous dance partner in college .. :)))))
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Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
Anonymous
26th Aug 2017 6:48pm
Your words are like an intricate dance pattern whirling around the room. Brava!
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Re: Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
15th Sep 2017 3:01pm
Thank you so much Ash ... for the read and thoughtful comments... greatly appreciated
Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
26th Aug 2017 6:55pm
this poem oozes the feeling of dance - I almost found myself swaying while reading :-) I really miss dancing :-(
a lovely poem - made me smile :-)
a lovely poem - made me smile :-)
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Re: Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
15th Sep 2017 3:04pm
Thank you so much David for the read and thoughtful comments ... I'm glad it made you sway, and smile ... if I lived closer, I'd take you for a spin .. turn that frown upside down :)
Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
27th Aug 2017 4:41pm
This goes straight to my heart. I could dance for hours. It's my first and forever love.
Grace and beauty here mamacita
Grace and beauty here mamacita
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Re: Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
15th Sep 2017 3:06pm
Thank you so much Lena .. for your beautiful comments ... greatly appreciated .. I feel the same, there is nothing more freeing
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Anonymous
27th Aug 2017 6:24pm
yes!
you took me with you and i was not a fly on the wall watching lol
i was dancing on the floor with.. love it, youve made my day
you took me with you and i was not a fly on the wall watching lol
i was dancing on the floor with.. love it, youve made my day
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Re: Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
15th Sep 2017 3:07pm
Thank you so much Splitsunsets for the read and lovely comments.. greatly appreciated
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Re: Re. Quest 4 Life/ two hours of dance
15th Sep 2017 3:08pm
Thank you again sweet Dani for stopping back to share more .. bless your heart :))))