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same
so one more sob story eh?
same old cliche' tears rolling down my cheek stuff?
what is it this time around?
said the cold soul to an inconsolable teen
the cold soul
probably herself
has been there, done that
yet
realize she does not
that despite
being the same disease
the same pain
not all stories are the same
not all pain
is the same.
two hands, two eyes, one heart and so on
everyone posseses
yet she forgets
about the uniqueness
of the DNA
same old cliche' tears rolling down my cheek stuff?
what is it this time around?
said the cold soul to an inconsolable teen
the cold soul
probably herself
has been there, done that
yet
realize she does not
that despite
being the same disease
the same pain
not all stories are the same
not all pain
is the same.
two hands, two eyes, one heart and so on
everyone posseses
yet she forgets
about the uniqueness
of the DNA
Published 25th Aug 2017
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25th Aug 2017 8:42pm
The thought presented here shows the lack of perception of the cold soul
but, not that of the "cold one" (poet).
Thoughtfully written and read.
Well done
but, not that of the "cold one" (poet).
Thoughtfully written and read.
Well done
perecption.
very interesting beast that hides in plain sight.
peer
review
both
appreciated
deeply.
very interesting beast that hides in plain sight.
peer
review
both
appreciated
deeply.
26th Aug 2017 10:58am
26th Aug 2017 2:36pm
the sanctum enshrined
in no better works
than the peer who complimented here.
appreciation
deep.
in no better works
than the peer who complimented here.
appreciation
deep.
8th Sep 2017 1:55pm
8th Sep 2017 2:31pm
