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I'm helping to build the path
you and I are walking on
to continue our life's journey.
My countenance is labored
as you throw me under the bridge.
you and I are walking on
to continue our life's journey.
My countenance is labored
as you throw me under the bridge.
Published 25th Aug 2017
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I enjoyed the metaphor used here.
Is your Avatar pointing to were the bridge is located? :-)
Nice write
Is your Avatar pointing to were the bridge is located? :-)
Nice write
3rd Sep 2017 7:27am
Actually, when you put it that way... yes it is. Thank you for that. :)
Anonymous
3rd Sep 2017 11:44pm
excellent!
