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The It of This
A bit of that a bit of this
I love to tip your pip a kiss
Play hide and seek and hit or miss
Take a slide on the slippery dip
A trip to bliss.
A bit of that, a bit of this
A view of you I'll sit and kiss
A picnic spot not fit to miss
The tip atop the pit of bliss
On the lip of it.
A bit of that a bit of this
I'll entice your pretty puss
To the lip of the precipice
There to tremble and paw and hiss
On tippy toes with Icarus
Rise. Take flight. This Is It.
Touch ... the it of this
clitoris
I love to tip your pip a kiss
Play hide and seek and hit or miss
Take a slide on the slippery dip
A trip to bliss.
A bit of that, a bit of this
A view of you I'll sit and kiss
A picnic spot not fit to miss
The tip atop the pit of bliss
On the lip of it.
A bit of that a bit of this
I'll entice your pretty puss
To the lip of the precipice
There to tremble and paw and hiss
On tippy toes with Icarus
Rise. Take flight. This Is It.
Touch ... the it of this
clitoris
Published 24th Aug 2017
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26th Aug 2017 3:36am
Nice rhyme and rhyme in this poem.
Syllable counts flowed free, nothing forced.
I like the structure also.
The way you handled the last line (figuratively :-) ) fit right in for a nice ending.
Well written
Syllable counts flowed free, nothing forced.
I like the structure also.
The way you handled the last line (figuratively :-) ) fit right in for a nice ending.
Well written
26th Aug 2017 5:07am
Thanks A_t The aim was to riff on rhymes with clitorus as much as possible. On the (few) occasions I've performed this piece, I whisper the last word (literally) ;)
30th Aug 2017 1:16pm
Kids and rhyming, nursery rhymes, Dr Seuss - interesting that you picked up on all that stuff in your response cos they are some of my influences. And I got a lot of it from my dad. Thanks for taking the time to compose your little ditty.
