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Never Give Up
To give up on love,.
Is to give up on the world,.
The wishes and desires for peace,.
The vanishing of happiness is tantamount to fire,.
Burning through cars and hospitals,.
With children crying inside,.
Love is tough, it is almost impossible,.
But with an honest heart,.
Integrity and honest intentions,.
Mistakes can be reversed,.
And a broken heart can become mended,.
Sapphire eyes I miss,.
My ulver I will always love,.
She is my everything,.
I wait for her to return,.
Because I love her, and I had to let her go,.,.,.,
Is to give up on the world,.
The wishes and desires for peace,.
The vanishing of happiness is tantamount to fire,.
Burning through cars and hospitals,.
With children crying inside,.
Love is tough, it is almost impossible,.
But with an honest heart,.
Integrity and honest intentions,.
Mistakes can be reversed,.
And a broken heart can become mended,.
Sapphire eyes I miss,.
My ulver I will always love,.
She is my everything,.
I wait for her to return,.
Because I love her, and I had to let her go,.,.,.,
Published 23rd Aug 2017
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23rd Aug 2017 10:21pm
If to give up Love is to give up the world, what is it if the world gives up on you? I quite like this one. There's a sentimental feeling to it.
23rd Aug 2017 10:23pm
the world does not give up on you....the world is merely a vessel for us to go about life on. and the people can only win if you let them
23rd Aug 2017 10:30pm
So it's the people that tend to give up on others then. Noted. :P Still liked the poem though.
23rd Aug 2017 10:32pm
24th Aug 2017 7:10am
