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Oh My Sun
Tender streams the night
flames a flicker filled delight
fresh a yellow painted rose
held in perfect sweet repose
Oh my sun, my precious sun
your warmth breathes long
hidden 'mongst a subtle guise
filling out a summer's day
Lunar leaps an oval face
stealing rays of saving grace
languid pains a vision lost
heart lie still a tempest tossed
flames a flicker filled delight
fresh a yellow painted rose
held in perfect sweet repose
Oh my sun, my precious sun
your warmth breathes long
hidden 'mongst a subtle guise
filling out a summer's day
Lunar leaps an oval face
stealing rays of saving grace
languid pains a vision lost
heart lie still a tempest tossed
Published 21st Aug 2017
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Anonymous
22nd Aug 2017 4:22am
Quality ink !!!
23rd Aug 2017 1:42am
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2017 5:04pm
*Ooh*
and that
rhythm`atic flow ... Nice!
4th Aug 2018 4:05am
And may I ask , my good friend Tim ,
you allow this one to read these words
in the Spoken Word to be heard ?
I believe I could do it justice , and seal it with a poet's kiss ;
I await your answer to this ask , and if allowed shall begin the task !
you allow this one to read these words
in the Spoken Word to be heard ?
I believe I could do it justice , and seal it with a poet's kiss ;
I await your answer to this ask , and if allowed shall begin the task !
4th Aug 2018 4:18am
4th Aug 2018 4:36am
