a living abortion

Relentlessly fine writing, both rough and erotic. There's more to it than sex, I gather:

i fist her hard  
then fuck her womb  
where all ideas are born  
& my aborted ones have died  

Don't believe I've ever read creativity presented in terms of hard sex so effectively.  Remarkable work Lady Crim.

thank you graciously Sir Crow yes more then sex you are right I am angry at my muse for being frigid with me..  love Crim

Brenda.. fucking powerful.. love the raw, and unplugged delivery.. got my blood flowing.. brilliant as always.. love you my sister..







































Dave

thank you Dave my brother happy to get your blood stirring.. love you.. Brenda

The birth of a poem, or perhaps a miscarriage of poetic justice. What you must go hrough to create a poem Brenda!
A fierce write!!!
JJ

thank you dearest JJ love your take on this write.. love Brenda

Nine unholy hells, my beautiful Dark Angel! You took fierce to a whole other level with this one. I'm afraid if I challenged my muse so powerfully she would whip my ass! Loving you and hugging you fiercely, gorgeous!

thank you lovely one force or lie down & give up is all I know.. I know she needs finesse but in this case it wasn't working.. all of my ideas were being aborted.. I love you lady.. Crim

i recently said something about how i would rather read poetic snuff <to which i've been complimented on how i can write it rather elegantly> than most erotic poetry well 'cause it's atrocious....i went to bed awhile ago with the worst headache to be woke by b.s. ~ picked up tab to find a reprieve.
this is a maniacal mixture of oh so many fine tidbits of fuckery....its elegantly profound and diabolically nasty
its straight over heads though violently ass kicking....i love it.....

thank you Sinister One I'm known to get down & dirty when in a certain mood.. I loved your latest poem by the way & deeply appreciate your thoughts on mine.. love Crim

i knew you'd understand my comment n that i understood this...forgive my tardiness im in a hole again...

get it

thank you beautiful.. love Crim

well, i'm utterly cunt struck by the fucking epicness.
god's tits.
fucking hell.
loved this
xo

thank you beautiful one i'm having fits of giggles over cunt struck ltm.. I love you lady.. Brenda

Very strong piece. I could feel the physical pounding, draining me. I was so drawn in. Thank you for the words.

thank you just hope the pounding didn't drain you to much.. love Crim

Oh holy shit...Dayumn lady this was hardcore, raw, searing  the flesh off ink letting!! Wow...

thank you dearest Poe for taking the ride with me.. love Crim

ooh la la

cest moi

mon tete! cest flambe

thank you lovely Anna i'm honored.. love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda....dear gods...this ink blew me away....that muse as far as I'm concerned was put in her place...

"so i fist her hard  
then fuck her womb  
where all ideas are born  
& my aborted ones have died"

you have most definitely planted a seed my love...one that shall thrive regardless of it's surroundings...even the aborted ones shall be resurrected...nothing will hold back the fierceness of my girl!!!

I love you so madly, deeply...I love it when you are like this!!!!!

forever & always - Taryn xoxoxoxo

thank you my love for feeling me on this write.. I love you passionately.. you left me with many smiles :) love Brenda

Very powerful imagery

thank you dearest Obsessed One.. love Crim

There is anger here, but there is also beauty in your brilliance. Bravo poet.

thank you graciously.. love Crim