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you & heroin dreams
i dreamed of you
we were in a mental hospital
that at times turned into a jail
i was busy trying to apply makeup
which is odd because
i don't wear it anymore
you entered in a drunken state
slurring your words
i said "what's wrong?"
you stated you didn't know
with a wink in your eye
you said "that nurse Connie
was trying to help you figure that out,
they asked if you masturbated enough"
suddenly you were behind me
with a bump to my bum
you laughed & said "plenty"
i never realized how tall you were
i seemed tiny in your embrace
in the jail there was a bull dyke
holding the most sexy preggie contest
though none appeared pregnant
they had narrowed it down to two
& asked my opinion
i chose the most sexy one
a fight broke out between me & the dyke
who eventually backed down
the nurse came in & told us all to settle down
suddenly i was alone in the room
i could hear you talking
i looked over the wall
saw you drinking & sexing up
the most beautiful preggie
i said "oh we have liquor here?"
the girl also had heroin
i said "i want some"
she replied "give me a minute"
i looked out & noticed we were on the streets
i realized we were free to leave
before awakening i remember
taking a last longing glance at the heroin
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 7th Aug 2017
| Edited 8th Aug 2017
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7th Aug 2017 2:23pm
priceless.vivid imagery turned and intriguing subject matter.nicely penned crimsin (Unveiling).
7th Aug 2017 2:43pm
Anonymous
7th Aug 2017 2:53pm
So amazing !!!
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7th Aug 2017 6:13pm
lol Quiet One yeah it was on hell of a strange dream like I craved this man like heroin.. love Crim
Anonymous
7th Aug 2017 5:12pm
I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who dreams vividly and in strange detail. It all rambled on like disjointed film clips and that ending brought it all together. The fight never ends, does it, my beautiful Dark Angel?
So much love for you...
So much love for you...
7th Aug 2017 6:14pm
thank you lovely one it was disjointed there was more to the dream that I can't remember but I think if I would have chosen the heroin I would have found myself locked back inside the madhouse.. love you lady.. Crim
7th Aug 2017 7:14pm
I felt I was falling into your words, which didn't fail to catch me and carry me to a higher place :) thanks for sharing!
- Fairy
- Fairy
7th Aug 2017 7:19pm
7th Aug 2017 7:35pm
fucking hell, i known this so well. that craving never goes away, swear i can smell it cooking some days.
so proud you kept on walking, beautiful
love you heaps
xo
so proud you kept on walking, beautiful
love you heaps
xo
7th Aug 2017 7:38pm
thank you graciously beautiful one I too can still smell it cooking.. I know somewhere deep inside if I would have turned around for the heroin I would find myself locked up again.. love you beautiful, sexy lady.. Brenda
You betcha, Brenda, I took a last longing glance at the heroin, never went back to it. Actially it was easier to quit than the speed I was shooting into my veins. I like this poem big time.
8th Aug 2017 1:22am
thank you dearest Jerry I had to quit the speed too though I snorted it.. it was hard as hell.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts.. love you my friend.. Brenda
Anonymous
8th Aug 2017 5:49pm
in my current state of shamble, i'm grateful for the lil reminders life happens to see you either stumble upon or flagrantly smack the shit out of one with. than package it with brash fuckery, lingering sensuality, burning desire and profound self empowerment as you have...well who could ask for more, or want it?
9th Aug 2017 2:42am
thank you Sinister One thank you for seeing the layers in this write & for an all around fantastic comment it's deeply appreciated.. love Crim
Anonymous
7th Aug 2017 10:14pm
My Beautiful Brenda, as always you overcome...even in your "dreams" you have strength and the will to keep walking when you could have chosen to stay, bound by nothing...perhaps this was a nightmare gifted from your subconscious for reassurance on just how strong of a woman you are!
I love you passionately my love!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately my love!
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
8th Aug 2017 1:23am
thank you my love for pointing that out to me maybe this dream was a message to me of some sort.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda
Anonymous
8th Aug 2017 2:16am
Brenda.. so powerful, and forthright.. your ability to tell it as it is.. and such amazing imagery.. i bow to you.. in respect.. you are forever brilliant.. love you..
Dave
Dave
9th Aug 2017 2:43am
thank you my graciously my brother Dave for such a wonderful comment.. I love you.. Brenda
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