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In Too Deep
You thought you could escape
Trying to negotiate
Surrender to my splendor, no time to wait
To debate, you the one who let things escalate,
That wanted to participate, so don’t let courage disintegrate
Oh you’re surprised by my rise
By my innocent disguise
That led to your demise
How I beat that pussy up, till your lids hid your eyes
If you run I will chase, sit down and I’ll taste
Show up at midnight in heels and lace
Relinquish your body for my tongue to trace
Drink my cum till your gums go numb,
Gag and choke till your face is plum
I take pleasure in tearing you apart, and have no problem finishing what you start.
Trying to negotiate
Surrender to my splendor, no time to wait
To debate, you the one who let things escalate,
That wanted to participate, so don’t let courage disintegrate
Oh you’re surprised by my rise
By my innocent disguise
That led to your demise
How I beat that pussy up, till your lids hid your eyes
If you run I will chase, sit down and I’ll taste
Show up at midnight in heels and lace
Relinquish your body for my tongue to trace
Drink my cum till your gums go numb,
Gag and choke till your face is plum
I take pleasure in tearing you apart, and have no problem finishing what you start.
Published 4th Aug 2017
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14th Aug 2017 6:18pm
Damn!!! Ima need a cool off break after this....Raw and sexy....got the mind rolling and the inside throbbing...everything was tasteful, direct and got the mental and intimate juices flowing.....Love your intensity...keep em coming.
15th Aug 2017 7:32pm
Well thank you It's a pleasure to bring such a rush with my poetic thrust... glad you enjoyed it 😜
10th Sep 2017 5:51am
This.
As a lover of sexual stories, & also a songwriter, this felt like an after hours track on my favorite station.
So yummy!
As a lover of sexual stories, & also a songwriter, this felt like an after hours track on my favorite station.
So yummy!
10th Sep 2017 1:15pm
What an astonishing thing to say One thing DUP has motivated me to do is be more open and free with erotic writing. Nice to see it's well received appreciate you
28th Sep 2017 6:22pm
it was as musical
as it was sexy
now i wish
next life i cum
as a woman
0 lover man
as it was sexy
now i wish
next life i cum
as a woman
0 lover man
28th Sep 2017 6:42pm
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5th May 2018 4:24am
I’m into rhyme as you will find.
I think & love it alla time
And write erotic as you do,
Like you, inspired by DU.
Jade tiger🐅
I think & love it alla time
And write erotic as you do,
Like you, inspired by DU.
Jade tiger🐅
16th Nov 2018 3:34am
I greatly appreciate you commenting
definitely trying to be more open and bold with erotica
definitely trying to be more open and bold with erotica
16th Nov 2018 2:55am
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